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Message de fleurymichon posté le 11-10-2020 à 15:53:32 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
j'aurais besoin qu'on m'aide pour corriger un texte s'il vous plait.
Je parle du point de vue d'une personne qui dénonce la conduite autonome et j'ai été victime d'une d'entre elles dans le texte.
I agree with that, self-driving has advantages because the driver can work during the drive. In more it optimize fuel consumption.
But I think that, today self-driving is dangerous because technologies of autonomous cars are not perfected enough to be on our roads. On the one hand perception system of autonomous vehicle is flawed. Indeed an autonomous car knock me down when I was crossing on a crosswalk. The car’s sensors didn’t detect me.
Moreover on the other hand self-driving cars are not adapted enough to surprising. We can then ask our selves how the car will react in dangerous situation. If the car will protect our life or the life of people in other vehicles.
We can let’s point out also that because of self driving, the driver could fall asleep.
Merci de m'aider.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 12-10-2020 11:07
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Message de fleurymichon posté le 11-10-2020 à 15:53:32 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
j'aurais besoin qu'on m'aide pour corriger un texte s'il vous plait.
Je parle du point de vue d'une personne qui dénonce la conduite autonome et j'ai été victime d'une d'entre elles dans le texte.
I agree with that, self-driving has advantages because the driver can work during the drive. In more it optimize fuel consumption.
But I think that, today self-driving is dangerous because technologies of autonomous cars are not perfected enough to be on our roads. On the one hand perception system of autonomous vehicle is flawed. Indeed an autonomous car knock me down when I was crossing on a crosswalk. The car’s sensors didn’t detect me.
Moreover on the other hand self-driving cars are not adapted enough to surprising. We can then ask our selves how the car will react in dangerous situation. If the car will protect our life or the life of people in other vehicles.
We can let’s point out also that because of self driving, the driver could fall asleep.
Merci de m'aider.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 12-10-2020 11:07
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Réponse : Correction/self-driving de sneaky13, postée le 12-10-2020 à 11:36:33 (S | E)
Bonjour,
Je veux bien essayer de t'aider
I agree with that, self-driving has advantages because the driver can work during the drive. In more (n'existe pas utiliser autre expression) it optimize (mal conjugué) fuel consumption. But I think that, today self-driving is dangerous because technologies of autonomous cars are not perfected (utiliser adjectif) enough to be on our roads. On the one hand perception system of autonomous vehicle is flawed. Indeed an autonomous car knock (mauvais temps) me down when I was crossing on a crosswalk. The car’s sensors (utiliser mot composé) didn’t detect me. Moreover on the other hand self-driving cars are not adapted enough to surprising(pas clair:dites plutôt à réagir à une situation inattendue) We can then ask our selves(en un seul mot) how the car will react in dangerous situation(au pluriel). If the car will protect our life or the life of people in other vehicles. We can let’s (mot qui n'a pas sa place ici) point out also that because of self driving, the driver could fall asleep.
Réponse : Correction/self-driving de gerondif, postée le 12-10-2020 à 14:51:46 (S | E)
Bonjour
Je vous avais corrigé ce texte hier juste avant qu'il ne disparaisse, retiré par un modérateur, et ne réapparaisse quelques minutes plus tard. Le message m'assurait que ma correction était parvenue à son destinataire, vous avez donc normalement deux corrections d'ailleurs assez similaires.
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