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Message de lucile83 posté le 16-05-2007 à 08:41:10
Hello
Correction par mp
See you
Bobby lui demanda pourquoi elle était allée au poste de police. Betty lui expliqua qu’elle avait déclaré avoir perdu son passeport pour en avoir un autre le plus vite possible. Bobby lui rendit donc son passeport qu’elle apporta au policier, disant qu’elle l’avait retrouvé. Bobby avait cependant commis une grave erreur car il avait sans le savoir glissé sa carte bancaire dans le passeport et Betty s’en rendit compte tout de suite. Elle demanda à Bobby s’il ne voyait pas d’inconvénient à ce qu’elle aille faire des courses. Il accepta, pensant qu’il serait tranquille pour un moment. Elle se rendit dans des magasins de luxe et acheta tout ce qui lui plaisait et même davantage. Une fois rentrée elle prit soin de remettre la carte bancaire dans le portefeuille de Bobby, et lui dit qu’elle aimerait bien aller au restaurant. Tout heureux que les choses s’arrangent entre eux Bobby l’invita à passer la journée sur un bateau-mouche.
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Modifié par bridg le 27-04-2009 19:49
Réponse: Betty se venge/ Traduction de patou66, postée le 16-05-2007 à 11:22:10
Hello Lucile,
Bobby asked her why she had gone to the police station. Betty explained him that she had declared her passport lost to have another one as quickly as possible. Bobby gave back her passport she brought to the policeman , saying she found it again.
Bobby had, for that, done a serious mistake because he had ,without know it, put his bank card in the passport and Betty sees it now. She asked Bobby if he didn't see a problem that she goes make shopping. He agreed thinking he will be quiet for a moment. She went to the nicer shops and bought all that she liked and more.
Once come back, she put again, with precaution, the bank card in Bobby's papers and tall him she would like going to the restaurant.
Happy all the things go better between them, Bobby invited her to spend the day on a water-bus.
Thank you Lucile .
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Modifié par patou66 le 16-05-2007 12:12
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Modifié par patou66 le 16-05-2007 14:49
Réponse: Betty se venge/ Traduction de bridg, postée le 16-05-2007 à 12:19:22
Hellooo
J'ai fait quelques essais de tournures, ne hurle pas
Betty was asked by Bobby what she went to the Police station for and she told him she declared her passport lost in order to get another one as soon as possible.
So, Bobby gave her, her passport back which she brought to the policeman pretending she regained it. Yet, Bobby seriously slipped up by squeezing his credit card in the passport and Betty realized it right away. She asked Bobby whether he didn't mind her doing some shopping. He said "yes" thinking she would be well behaved for a while. She went to some luxuries shops and bought all what indulged herself and even more.
Once being at home she managed to put back carefully the credit card into the wallet and told him she would like to eat out. Being high happy, thinking the situation settled down among themselves, Bobby invited her to spend the day on a boat taxi.
<= Bobby<= Betty
Réponse: Betty se venge/ Traduction de vero75, postée le 16-05-2007 à 14:26:22
Hi Lucile,
Bobby asked her why she went to the police station. Betty explained him she had claimed losing her passport so that she would get another one as soon as possible. So Bobby gave her back her passport and she took it to the policeman saying that she had recovered it. However, Bobby had made a big mistake for he had unknowingly let his bank card slip in the passport and Betty realized it at once. She asked Bobby if he would not mind her going shopping. He agreed thinking he would be left alone for a while. She went to luxury shops and bought everything she fancied and even more. Once at home, she carefully put the bank card back in Bobby’s wallet and told him she would like to go to the restaurant. So happy that things went better between them, Bobby invited her to spent the day on a taxi boat.
Réponse: Betty se venge/ Traduction de silsilay, postée le 16-05-2007 à 16:16:07
Hi,
Bobby asked her why she went to the police station. Betty explained him she declared her passport lost in order to have another one as quickly as possible.
Then, Bobby gave back her passport that she brought to the policeman, sayin that she found it. However, Bobby has comitted a serious mistake because his bank card crept into the passport, without knowing,and Betty realized that rapidly. She asked to Bobby if he didn't have an inconvenient that she went shopping. He agreed, thinking he would be alone for a moment.
She went in luxuries shops and bought all she wanted and much more. When she came back, she put carefully the bank car in the Bobby's wallet and told him that she would like to go to the restaurant.
Completely happy that things turned out right between them Bobby invited her to pass the day on a boat taxi.
See you soon ....
Réponse: Betty se venge/ Traduction de vero7000, postée le 16-05-2007 à 17:48:10
Hello!
Bobby asked her wherefore she went to the police station. Betty explained him that she declared her passport was lost and wanted to receive another one as soon as possible. Bobby returned her passport then she went again to the police station and said that she found it.
However, Bobby forgot his credit card in her passport and Betty profited of his mistake.
She asked Bobby that she went to go shopping. He accepted, thinking he would be quiet for a moment. She went to the luxuries shops and bought all lovely objects and more.
At home, she put secretly the credit card in his wallet and she said that she would..... go to the restaurant. He was happy what all was perfect. Bobby invited her to make a day on a boat taxi.
It’s the new boat taxi… It’s modern
Thank you.
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Modifié par vero7000 le 17-05-2007 16:48
Réponse: Betty se venge/ Traduction de meway, postée le 16-05-2007 à 19:13:53
Hello Lucile, nice to hear from the three of you!
Bobby asked her why she had gone to the police station.Betty explained that she had reported having lost her passport ,so that she would get a new one as quickly as possible.Bobby gave her back her passport that she brought to the police officer, saying she had recovered it.
However, Bobby had made a terrible mistake: without noticing, he had slipped his credit card in the passport and Betty realised it in no time. She asked Bobby whether he didn't mind her going shopping. He said he didn't,thinking it would give him a break for a while.
She went to luxurious shops and bought whatever she fancied, and even more
.Once she got home,she carefully slipped the credit card back in Bobby's wallet, and told him she would love to go out for lunch.As happy as can be to see things going back to normal,Bobby invited her for a day out on a river boat.
WHAT'S NEXT ?
Thanks a lot.
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Modifié par bridg le 16-05-2007 19:37
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Réponse: Betty se venge/ Traduction de mp27, postée le 16-05-2007 à 20:13:46
Hello lucile83!
Bobby asked her why she'd been to the Police Station. Betty explained to him she'd declared the loss of her passport so that she could get another one as soon as possible. So, Bobby gave back her passport which she then passed on to the police officer saying she'd found it again. However, Bobby had made a big mistake because, without noticing, he had slipped his bank card inside the passport and Betty immediately became aware of it.
She asked Bobby if he didn't mind her doing some shopping. He agreed, thinking he would have peace and quiet for a little while. She made her way to some “exclusive” shops where she bought whatever came to her fancy, and even more. Once back home, she made sure to put back the bank card inside Bobby' wallet and she told him she would love to go to the restaurant. Feeling quite happy that things were working out between them, Bobby invited her to spend the day on a bateau-mouche.
(on a pleasure boat along the river Seine --> un peu long, je pense qu'on peut laisser ”bateau-mouche”...?)
(so.... Betty knew Bobby's pin number ...Ah, ah!)
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Modifié par lucile83 le 17-05-2007 15:59
oui c'est un peu long
Quant au code bancaire...Betty est très forte !
Réponse: Betty se venge/ Traduction de nick27, postée le 16-05-2007 à 23:28:52
Hello !
Bobby asked her why she'd been to the police station. Betty explained to him that she'd said she had lost her passport in order to get a new one as quickly as possible. So Bobby gave back her passport which she showed to the police officer saying she had found it. However Bobby had made a terrible mistake because he had slipped his bank card into the passport without even noticing it. Betty found it straightaway. She asked Bobby if he had no objection to her doing the shopping. He said there was no problem, thinking she would leave him alone for a while. So she went to the store selling luxury goods and bought everything she liked and even more. Once she was back home, she carefully put Bobby's bank card back in his wallet, and she told him she'd like to go to the restaurant. Since Bobby was happy that everything was getting better between them both, he invited her to spend the day on a bateau-mouche.
Thanks Lucile
Réponse: Betty se venge/ Traduction de ubu, postée le 17-05-2007 à 15:52:27
Hello Lucile
Bobby asked her why she was been to the police office. Betty explained to him she was declared the loss of her passport so to get a new one as quick as possible. Bobby gave her back her passport which she brought to the policeman, saying she has found it again. Bobby however was made a hard error because he slipped his bank card in the passport unwittingly and Betty realised it immediately. She asked Bobby if he had no objection against shopping. He agreed, thinking he would be quiet for a while. She went into luxury shops and bought pleasant things and rather more. Once she had come back home she took care to place again the bank card in Bobby’s wallet and she told him she felt like going to a restaurant. Very glad for coming to an agreement Bobby invited her to spend all the day on a bateau-mouche.
Thanks you Lucile
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Modifié par ubu le 17-05-2007 15:54
Réponse: Betty se venge/ Traduction de cat3, postée le 17-05-2007 à 17:19:45
Bonjour Lucile
Bobby asked her why she had gone to the police station.Betty explained him she had declared the loss of her passeport,in order to receive another one rapidly.
So,Bobby gave back her passeport,witch she brought to the policeman,saying she found it .However Bobby had made a serious mistake ,putting abstractedly his credit card in the passeport,and Betty noticed that immediately.She asked to Bobby if he had no objection,to her doing some shopping He agreed ,thinking he would have break for a moment
She went to the luxury shops and bought all that she liked and more
When she come back home ,she put with precaution the credit card into the Bobby's wallet and tall him she would like to go the restaurant Bobby was happy all the things are going better between them,he invited her to spend the day on a taxi boat
Merci lucile
cat
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Modifié par cat3 le 17-05-2007 17:20
Réponse: Betty se venge/ Traduction de maya13, postée le 17-05-2007 à 17:49:54
hello Lucile,
Bobby asked why she'd been to the police station. Betty explained she had declared the loss of her passport to get another one as quickly as possible. Bobby gave her back the passport that she brought back to the policeman saying she'd found it again. Bobby had made a serious mistake slipping (by mistake) his credit card inside her passport and Betty had noticed that straightaway. She asked Bobby if he had any objection to her doing some shopping. He agreed, thinking he could get some peace for a while. She went to luxury shops and bought everything she liked and even more. Once back home, she took care to put back the card inside Bobby's wallet and told him she'd like to go to the restaurant. Very pleased that things were getting better between them, Bobby invited her to spend the day on a river-boat.
thank you again Lucile - see you
Réponse: Betty se venge/ Traduction de karenbella, postée le 17-05-2007 à 22:40:49
Hello Lucile
My translation is the following one:
Bobby asked her why she went to the post office. Betty explained to him that she declared the lost of her passport in order to had an other the more quickly possible. Bobby gave her back her passport which she brought to the cop, saying she has found it back. However Bobby done a great mistake because he slide his bank card in the passport and Betty saw it. She asked Bobby if he didn’t see inconvenient she went do the shopping. He accepted, thinking he would be quiet for a moment. She went to shops and bought all things she found nice and even more. One time back at home she take care of put back the card in Bobby’s portfolio, and she told him she would like to go to restaurant. Very happy to see things going all right between them Bobby invited her to spend the day on a bateau-mouche.
waiting for your comments
thanks and have a good evening!
Smahen
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Modifié par karenbella le 17-05-2007 22:42
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Modifié par karenbella le 17-05-2007 22:47
Réponse: Betty se venge/ Traduction de micka, postée le 17-05-2007 à 22:54:34
Voici ma traduction
Bobby asked her why she went to police station. Betty explained to him that she declared her loss of passport in order to get an other as soon as possible. Bobby gave her back her passport that she brought to the policeman telling him she found it. Bobby had nevertheless committed a serious mistake as he unwillingly put his credit card inside Betty's passport and he immediately realized it. She asked Bobby if he minded that she go shopping. He accepted thinking that he would be left alone for a while. She headed to luxurious shops and bought everything she wished and even more. Once back, she took care to put the credit card back into Bobby's wallet and told him that she would like to go to the restaurant. All happy that things were pulling together between them, Bobby invited her to spend the day on a fly-boat.
Les commentaire sont bien sur les bienvenus Merci beaucoup!
Réponse: Betty se venge/ Traduction de coferam, postée le 18-05-2007 à 11:16:19
Bonjour Lucile,
Betty bites back.
Bobby asked her why she had gone to the police station. Betty explained him she had stated to have lost her passport in order to get another as quickly as possible. Bobby thus took back her passport which she brought to the police officer, saying that she had found it. However, Bobby had made a serious mistake, because, without to know, he had put his bank card in Betty’s passport and she realized that at once.She asked Bobby if he didn’t mind her going shopping. He agreed thinking he will be quiet for a moment. She went to the posh shops and bought all what she liked and even more. She came back at home and with care put back the bank card in Bobby’s wallet and told him she would like to go to the restaurant. So happy that things went better between them, Bobby invited Betty to spend the day on a taxi boat.
et Merci.
Réponse: Betty se venge/ Traduction de marie11, postée le 18-05-2007 à 18:07:31
Bonjour lucile.
Bobby asked her why she had been to the police station. Betty explained to him that she had reported having lost her passport in order to get a new one as quickly as possible. Bobby gave her back her passport which she brought back to the police officer saying that she had laid her hands on it.
However, Bobby had made a serious mistake because he had slipped his bank card into her passport inadvertendly, and Betty noticed it straight off.
She asked Bobby if he didn't mind to her doing the shopping. He agreed, thinking that he would enjoy a while of quietness. She went to luxury shops and bought everything that gave her great pleasure and even more.
Once back home, she made a point of putting the bank card back into Bobby's wallet, and told him she wishes she ate out.
Utterly delighted that things were getting better between them, he invited her to spend the whole day on a bateau-mouche.
Réponse: Betty se venge/ Traduction de aud18, postée le 18-05-2007 à 21:29:49
Hi lucile ! Revenge is a dish best served cold but I don't think that day at Paris would change the things for them...to be continued !
Bobby asked her why she had been gone to the police station. Betty explained him she had declared lost his passport in order to have a new one as soon as possible. So Bobby gave her back her passport which she brought to the policemen, saying she had found it. However Bobby had made a serious mistake because without knowing it he had slipped his credit card in her passport and Betty realized it straightaway. She asked to Bobby if he didn't see a disadvantage that she went shopping. He accepted, thinking he would have peace for a moment. She went to luxury shops and brought all she liked and even more. Once come back, she took care of put the creditcard back in Bobby's wallet, and said him she would like to go to the restaurant. All happy that things were getting better between them, Bobby invited her to spend a day on a pleasure boat on the Seine.
Thanks a lot !
Réponse: Betty se venge/ Traduction de alice, postée le 21-05-2007 à 07:59:51
Bonjour Lucile,
Bobby asked her why she has been to the police station. Betty explained him she had declared that she had lost her passport in order to have another one as soon as possible.Bobby gave her passport back to her. She brought it to the policeman saying she had found it again. However Bobby had made a serious mistake: without knowing that, he had slide his cash card into the passport and Betty saw it immediatly. She asked Bobby if he didn't mind her doing some shopping. He accepted thinking he was quiet during a moment. She went to luxury shops and bought all she liked and even more. When she was go back she was sure to put back the cash card inside the Bobby's wallet and said to him she would like go to the restaurant. Bobby, very happy about things work out between us, invited her to spend the day on a riverboat.
J'ai trouvé l'expression "to be sure" pour "prendre soin" dans mon dictionnaire mais elle me perturbe.
Réponse: Betty se venge/ Traduction de lucile83, postée le 21-05-2007 à 13:49:41
Hello
et à tous pour vos efforts, et à certains en prime pour leur acharnement louable à trouver le mot juste.
Voici ma proposition :
Bobby asked her what she had been to the police station for. Betty explained she had declared her passport lost in order to get another one as soon as possible. Thus Bobby gave her back her passport which she brought to the policeman, telling him she had found it. However Bobby had made a serious mistake by putting his credit card into the passport and Betty realised it at once. She asked Bobby whether he didn’t mind her going shopping. He agreed, thinking he would be undisturbed for a while. She went to upmarket shops and bought everything she liked and still more. Once back home she took care of putting back the credit card into Bobby’s wallet, and told him she would enjoy going to the restaurant. All happy things were turning out right for each other Bobby invited her to spend the day on a river boat for sightseeing.
J'ai préféré "what..for" à "why" , ne m'en veuillez pas
Information très intéressante de xxx membre du site:
J'ai à l'instant donné un coup de fil à ma fille xxx qui habite Londres. Elle a l'âge de la Betty de ton histoire, elle s'y connaît bien mieux que moi sur le chapitre magasins. Je te transmets donc du “tout frais moulu":
“On dit 'designer shops' pour tous les magasins qui vendent vêtements, sacs, accessoires du designer en question... C'est très exclusif et très cher... et souvent de tels magasins prennent le nom “boutique”, comme par exemple, “Chanel Boutique” (dans les quartiers chics de Londres...).
On trouve des 'luxury goods' / 'exclusive luxury goods' (pas seulement dans le rayon vêtements & chaussures), dans des 'up market stores/ upmarket shops'.
Le célèbre Harrods, c'est un 'up-market department store'.
Tout ce qui est de grand luxe, qualité supérieure, grande marque, se dit 'upmarket'. Tout ce qui est "upmarket' est: 'high class' et il faut être riche pour se payer de telles marchandises!
See you
Réponse: Betty se venge/ Traduction de fenics, postée le 21-05-2007 à 15:10:06
Bonjour,
J'arrive un peu après la bataille mais voiçi ma proposition qui n'attend que vos conseils comme d'habitude pour être plus juste. Encore une fois merci d'avance Lucile.
Betty gets his revenge.
Bobby asked her the reason why she had gone to the police station. Betty explained to him she had notified of losing her passport in order to obtain another one as quickly as possible. Thus, Bobby gave her passport back her and she brought to the policemen by saying that she had got it back. However, Bobby had made a mistake so she had slipped his credit card into Betty's passport without realizing but Betty noticed it just now. She asked Bobby if he didn't mind that she was going to do the shopping. By thinking he would be quiet for a moment, he agreed. She went to the luxe shops and bought all she fancied and even more. Once she was back, she took care to put the credit card back into Bobby's wallet and she told him she would like to eat out. As he happy that everything turned out fine between them, Bobby invited her to spend the day on a sight-seeing boat.
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Modifié par fenics le 21-05-2007 15:10
Réponse: Betty se venge/ Traduction de liltiss, postée le 21-05-2007 à 22:25:21
hello
Bobby asked her why she had gone to the police station. Betty explained to him that she had declared that she had lost her passport to have another one as quickly as possible. So, Bobby gave her back her passport which she brought to the policeman telling him that she had found it. However, Bobby had made a serious mistake, for without knowing it, he had slipped his bank card in the passport and Betty realized it immediately. She asked Bobby if he had no objection if she went shopping. Thinking that he would be alone for a moment, he accepted it. She went to exclusive shops and bought everything she liked and even more. When she went back, she made sure to put the bank card back in Bobby's purse and told him that she would really appreciate to go to the restaurant. As he was very happy that everything gets better between them, Bobby invited her to spend the day on a bateau-mouche.
Réponse: Betty se venge/ Traduction de larrym, postée le 29-05-2007 à 23:25:08
Betty's revange
- « Why did you go to the police station, » Bobby inquired.
- “I can’t find my passport. So I went down there and reported its loss so that I could get a new one as quickly as possible”, Betty said.
- “Here it is”, Bobby said as he was handing her back the passport.
She went off to the police station again, showed it to the officer and said she had found it back. Yet, Bobby had made a dreadful mistake. He had put his credit card in it by accident. Betty immediately realized it and asked Bobby if he minded her going shopping. He agreed, thinking he would be left alone for a while. She hit pricy boutiques and bought all she wanted and even more. Upon her return, she made sure to put Bobby’s card back in his wallet and told him she would not mind going out for dinner. As he was glad to see that things had worked out, Bobby invited her to spend the day on a fly-boat.
Later gator
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Modifié par larrym le 29-05-2007 23:26
Réponse: Betty se venge/ Traduction de nicolyon, postée le 03-06-2007 à 20:25:19
Hello Lucile,
Bobby asked her why she has gone to the police station. Betty explained him that she has declared having lost her passport in order to have an other one as soon as possible. Bobby gave back her her passport she brought to the policeman saying she had found it. Bobby committed a big mistake having left unwillingly his credit card in the passport and Betty realised it suddenly. She asked Bobby if he does mind that she goes shopping. He agreed thinking he will be quiet for a while. She went in luxurious shops and bought all she fancied and even more. As she came back she cares to put the credit card in Bobby's wallet, and told him she would fancy going to the restaurant. Being happy to see things were going well Bobby invited her to spend the day on a bateau mouche
Réponse: Betty se venge/ Traduction de cooolcat, postée le 04-06-2007 à 13:59:01
Bobby asked her why she had gone to the police station. Betty explained to him she had declared her passeport lost so that she can have another one as quickly as possible. Bobby gave her her passeport back that she brought to the policeman, saying she had find it actually. However, Bobby had made a big mistake leaving his credit card in the passeport, which Betty noticed right away. She asked Bobby whether he didn't mind her going shopping. He accepted, thinking he could have a rest for a moment. She went to luxury shops and bought everything she liked, and even more. When she came back, she paid attention to put the credit card back in Bobby's wallet, and told him she would like to go to the restaurant. Bobby was happy things were going better between them and invited her on a bateau mouche for the day.
ouf ! c'était moins simple qu'il n'y paraissait ! On ne rigole pas merci
Réponse: Betty se venge/ Traduction de lucile83, postée le 04-06-2007 à 14:19:21
Bonjour aux retardataires,
Merci pour votre traduction.
Vous pouvez voir ma proposition quelques posts au-dessus, et je vous invite à faire une auto-correction.
Au cas où vous rencontreriez un problème, contactez-moi par message privé et nous essaierons de résoudre le problème ensemble.
Merci pour votre participation.
See you soon.
Réponse: Betty se venge/ Traduction de micmo35, postée le 03-07-2007 à 23:19:33
Hello!
Bobby asked him why it had gone to the police station. Betty explained to him that it had stated to have lost its passport to have some another as quickly as possible. Bobby thus returned his passport to him which it brought to the police officer, saying that it had found it. Bobby had however made a serious error because it had without the knowledge slipped its bank card into the passport and Betty realised there immediately. She asked Bobby if he did not see a disadvantage so that she will make races. He accepted, thinking that he would be quiet for one moment. She went in stores of luxury and bought all that it liked and even more. Once returned it took care to give the bank card in the wallet of Bobby, and says to him that it would like to go to the restaurant. Very happy that the things are arranged between them Bobby invited it to spend the day on a water-bus.
Réponse: Betty se venge/ Traduction de imy48, postée le 27-04-2009 à 19:38:29
Hi Lucile
Bobby asked her why she had gone to the police station, Betty explained that she had declared the loss of her passport in order to get another one as soon as possible. Bobby gave her back her passeport which she took to the police man; let's say she had found it again .Bobby;otherwise; had made a serious mistake because he had,without he knews , put his bank card in the passeport and Betty realized it quickly, she asked Bobby if he didn't mind that she went shopping. He accepted thought he would be quite for a moment .She went to luxurious shops and bought whatever she liked even more .Once she came back home , she put back carefully the cad in Bobby's wallet and told him that she would like to go to a restaurant .Very happy that everythings was getting well between them Bobby invited her to spend a day on a taxi boat.
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Modifié par bridg le 27-04-2009 19:50
Ce sujet date de 2 ans, la correction de lucile83 est au dessus.