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Lettre motivation/aide
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Message de marg14 posté le 18-12-2012 à 19:38:24 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir,
J'ai une lettre de motivation à faire pour être acceptée dans une université américaine, et j'ai très peur d'avoir fait des fautes quelconques. Quelqu'un pourrait-il m'aider? C'est à rendre pour jeudi.
Merci d'avance.
Dear Sir, Dear Madam
As I am preparing a bachelor degree in English language, literature and civilization in the University of Caen, I am currently looking for study in the United States next year and I am very interesting in ISEP program.
I chose to be a candidate to study abroad for several incentives. First, I really want to improve and consolidate my English language skills for my future career. It would indeed let me acquire ease and self-confident. Then, I love traveling and meeting other people and different cultures and the concrete discovery of a new culture would therefore help me to get a wider vocabulary and fluent speaking skills. To finish, northern American attracted me as soon as I have started learning its history.
I have always been interesting in English studies and when I reached High school, I chose English as my speciality. I hope to become English lecturer and researcher in English language and linguistics. I am currently attending education course. In addition, I give English private tuitions to teenagers. Living in the United States would be a great experience for me and I really have faith in its high system of education as I have made inquiries about the different American universities. Moreover, ISEP program seems to be the best one for my expectation.
I am besides of a curious, open-minded and really independent nature and I feel completely at ease with the idea of living abroad alone. I am a hard-working person and a full immersion in this country would be rewarding my postgraduate studies and to become a competent teacher.
Best regards
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Modifié par lucile83 le 18-12-2012 21:17
Message de marg14 posté le 18-12-2012 à 19:38:24 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir,
J'ai une lettre de motivation à faire pour être acceptée dans une université américaine, et j'ai très peur d'avoir fait des fautes quelconques. Quelqu'un pourrait-il m'aider? C'est à rendre pour jeudi.
Merci d'avance.
Dear Sir, Dear Madam
As I am preparing a bachelor degree in English language, literature and civilization in the University of Caen, I am currently looking for study in the United States next year and I am very interesting in ISEP program.
I chose to be a candidate to study abroad for several incentives. First, I really want to improve and consolidate my English language skills for my future career. It would indeed let me acquire ease and self-confident. Then, I love traveling and meeting other people and different cultures and the concrete discovery of a new culture would therefore help me to get a wider vocabulary and fluent speaking skills. To finish, northern American attracted me as soon as I have started learning its history.
I have always been interesting in English studies and when I reached High school, I chose English as my speciality. I hope to become English lecturer and researcher in English language and linguistics. I am currently attending education course. In addition, I give English private tuitions to teenagers. Living in the United States would be a great experience for me and I really have faith in its high system of education as I have made inquiries about the different American universities. Moreover, ISEP program seems to be the best one for my expectation.
I am besides of a curious, open-minded and really independent nature and I feel completely at ease with the idea of living abroad alone. I am a hard-working person and a full immersion in this country would be rewarding my postgraduate studies and to become a competent teacher.
Best regards
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Modifié par lucile83 le 18-12-2012 21:17
Réponse: Lettre motivation/aide de bluestar, postée le 19-12-2012 à 17:35:17 (S | E)
Hello,
As I am preparing a Bbachelor's degree in English language, literature and civilization in the University of Caen, I am currently looking for study in the United States next year and I am very interesting
(pas le mot juste - il faut "interest--") in the ISEP program. I chose to be a candidate to study abroad for several incentives
("reasons" serait mieux). First, I really want to improve and consolidate my English language skills for my future career. It would indeed let me acquire ease and self-confident (il faut le nom, pas l'adjectif). Then, I love traveling and meeting other people and different cultures and the concrete(bizarre!) discovery of a new culture would therefore help me to get a wider vocabulary and fluent speaking skills. To finish, northern American (l'adjectif ne va pas ici,-- nom?) attracted me as soon as I have started (temps?)learning its history.I have always been interesting
in English studies and when I reached High Sschool, I chose English as my speciality. I hope to become (article indéfini manquant)English lecturer and researcher in English language and linguistics. I am currently attending education course. In addition, I give English private tuitions to teenagers. Living in the United States would be a great experience for me and I really have faith in its high system of education as I have made inquiries about the different American universities. Moreover,(article manquant) ISEP program seems to be the best one for my expectation ('needs' serait mieux). I am besides of a curious, open-minded and really independent nature and I feel completely at ease with the idea of living abroad alone. I am a hard-working person and a full immersion in this country would be rewarding my postgraduate studies and to become a competent teacher. (pas tout à fait raison - reformuler; "compléterait etc")
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Modifié par bluestar le 19-12-2012 17:36
Réponse: Lettre motivation/aide de marg14, postée le 19-12-2012 à 17:38:04 (S | E)
Merci beaucoup beaucoup !
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