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Message de alfi posté le 22-11-2013 à 15:04:31 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
J'ai rédigé mon Cv en anglais afin de postuler à un stage US,mais je crains qu'il y reste de nombreuses erreurs d'orthographe et de grammaire.
Merci d'avance pour votre aide.
EDUCATION
2011-current Ecole d’ingénieur XXX, XX, France.
Chemistry major at a graduate-level engineering school which offers classes in French, English and German. Admission is based on a highly-competitive national exam upon which I ranked 795th out of over 4000 candidates.
• Executed bi-weekly practical experiments, which consist in synthesis in organic and inorganic chemistry and chemical analysis
• Competent in the use of UV-Vis, infrared and NMR spectroscopy as well as GC, HPLC and AAS.
• Experienced in both organic and inorganic chemistry including the handling of air sensitive compounds.
• Participated in organic chemistry, analytic chemistry and engineering chemistry classes.
2009-2011 Lycée XX, XX, France
Preparatory classes: A two-year intensive post-high school program in preparation for the national competitive exam for admission to engineering schools.
2009 Lycée X, X, France
French “Baccalauréat” (equivalent to Advanced High School diploma) with major in physics and mathematics obtained with highest honours.
PROFESSIONNAL EXPERIENCE
2013 MSD Animal Health, xxxxx
Six-month internship within the Quality Control Operation department
• Responsible for the analysis of test samples using HPLC. Used this method consistently for 6 months and trained a junior lab technician in the HPLC.
• Carried out several projects concerning analytical method developments and improvements by HPLC and UPLC.
February 2013 CNRS molecular biogeochemistry laboratory, xxxx
Conducted extraction and analysis by GC and GC-MS of anthropogenic soils
2013 Industrial project for the firm Technisoudure, xxxxx
Established comparative study of the different monitoring methods of stripping and passivation bath which could be set up in the company within a team of 10 people
July 2012 Kunststoffe und Farben Gesellschaft, xxxx
Five-week internship with company which focuses on PMMA recycling. Performed experiment in laboratory including raw materials tests, end production tests and granulometric analysis
LANGUAGES
French: Native speaker
English: Proficient
German: Proficient
COMPUTER SKILLS
Use of Microsoft Office Suite, Chromaleon, TopSpin and SciFinder
EXTRACURRICULAR INVOLVEMENT
Experienced traveller in Europe
Hobbies: Badminton, cycling, science fiction literature.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 22-11-2013 18:37
Message de alfi posté le 22-11-2013 à 15:04:31 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
J'ai rédigé mon Cv en anglais afin de postuler à un stage US,mais je crains qu'il y reste de nombreuses erreurs d'orthographe et de grammaire.
Merci d'avance pour votre aide.
EDUCATION
2011-current Ecole d’ingénieur XXX, XX, France.
Chemistry major at a graduate-level engineering school which offers classes in French, English and German. Admission is based on a highly-competitive national exam upon which I ranked 795th out of over 4000 candidates.
• Executed bi-weekly practical experiments, which consist in synthesis in organic and inorganic chemistry and chemical analysis
• Competent in the use of UV-Vis, infrared and NMR spectroscopy as well as GC, HPLC and AAS.
• Experienced in both organic and inorganic chemistry including the handling of air sensitive compounds.
• Participated in organic chemistry, analytic chemistry and engineering chemistry classes.
2009-2011 Lycée XX, XX, France
Preparatory classes: A two-year intensive post-high school program in preparation for the national competitive exam for admission to engineering schools.
2009 Lycée X, X, France
French “Baccalauréat” (equivalent to Advanced High School diploma) with major in physics and mathematics obtained with highest honours.
PROFESSIONNAL EXPERIENCE
2013 MSD Animal Health, xxxxx
Six-month internship within the Quality Control Operation department
• Responsible for the analysis of test samples using HPLC. Used this method consistently for 6 months and trained a junior lab technician in the HPLC.
• Carried out several projects concerning analytical method developments and improvements by HPLC and UPLC.
February 2013 CNRS molecular biogeochemistry laboratory, xxxx
Conducted extraction and analysis by GC and GC-MS of anthropogenic soils
2013 Industrial project for the firm Technisoudure, xxxxx
Established comparative study of the different monitoring methods of stripping and passivation bath which could be set up in the company within a team of 10 people
July 2012 Kunststoffe und Farben Gesellschaft, xxxx
Five-week internship with company which focuses on PMMA recycling. Performed experiment in laboratory including raw materials tests, end production tests and granulometric analysis
LANGUAGES
French: Native speaker
English: Proficient
German: Proficient
COMPUTER SKILLS
Use of Microsoft Office Suite, Chromaleon, TopSpin and SciFinder
EXTRACURRICULAR INVOLVEMENT
Experienced traveller in Europe
Hobbies: Badminton, cycling, science fiction literature.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 22-11-2013 18:37
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