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Message de gaabz29 posté le 14-06-2015 à 03:05:11 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Ayant fini mon CV j'aimerais avoir votre avis, à savoir l’orthographe, la grammaire et la forme de ce CV, s'il vous semble correct.
Merci pour vos réponses.
PROFILE
I'm a French man and I'm in Australia on a 1-year Working Holiday Visa. I have made up my mind to come to Australia for a new experience and work in an English environment.
I have experience in English. I used to work in a night club at xxx United Kingdom) as Glass Collector for six months where I improved my English level. I have also experience as factory worker, and I worked as shelf stacker in supermarket and deli worker during the summer when I was student.
Throughout my working experience, I developed an open mind to take on responsibility. This would serve me every day and give a real vision of the work world. I became organized and thorough in my work.
I can do any work I set my mind to. The most important thing to me is work because inactivity does not appeal to me. The more I work, the more confidence I can build. I am independent, a hard worker and really enthusiastic. I'm a fast leaner and highly motivated. I'm fully available in the week and during the week-end. I'm ready to start working for you as soon as you need me to.
Feel free to contact me whenever you want.
PROFESSIONAL EXPERIENCE
Sept 2013 to May 2015 : Factory worker
To finance my travel to Australia I worked in a boiler factory (Usine de fabrication de chaudières)occupying various posts
June to August 2013: Shelf stocker (Rayon lessive)
Stocked shelves and managed stock rotation as necessary
Assisted customers with locating items when necessary
Managed inventory and store stocks
Nov 2012 to May 2013: Glass Collector
My task was to collect and clean glasses, sweap and mop the floor
Receive deliveries and stock them in the stock room
Then I worked at the reception of the locker room
Couples of months later I was in charge to explain at the new employees our way to work in the night club.
July-August 2012: Deli Worker (Traiteur supermarché)
Sliced and weighed deli meats and cheeses
Maintained and stocked all designated section areas
July-August 2010/2011: Shelf Stocker (Mise en rayon fruits et legumes)
Maintained and stocked all designated section areas in laundry
May-June 2011 : Design Office
Draw all the factory process to know where incorporate the next machines in the factory
July 2009 to August 2009 : Factory worker
Full time job as a food factory worker, occupying various posts.
July 2008 to August 2009 : Oyster picker
Summer job as an employee in an oyster exploitation in charge of the picking
EDUCTION AND QUALIFICATIONS
2010-2012: Vocational training certificate in Industrial Product Design
Two years after the French baccalaureat (equivalent to A ‘levels)
2008-2010: BTEC National Diploma in Microtechnics
2006-2008: BTEC First Diploma in Electronics
LANGUAGE AND SKILLS
Language:
French: mother tongue
English: fluent
Demonstrative:
Dynamic, adaptive, rigorous, able to work as a team as well as alone, multitasking skills and punctual.
INTEREST AND HOBBIES
Sports - I played football since I was 5 years old. I'm passionate about the sport and I like also follow the NBA and Tennis.
Traveling - United Kingdom, Japan, Spain
Je vous remercie!
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Modifié par lucile83 le 14-06-2015 07:57
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Message de gaabz29 posté le 14-06-2015 à 03:05:11 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Ayant fini mon CV j'aimerais avoir votre avis, à savoir l’orthographe, la grammaire et la forme de ce CV, s'il vous semble correct.
Merci pour vos réponses.
PROFILE
I'm a French man and I'm in Australia on a 1-year Working Holiday Visa. I have made up my mind to come to Australia for a new experience and work in an English environment.
I have experience in English. I used to work in a night club at xxx United Kingdom) as Glass Collector for six months where I improved my English level. I have also experience as factory worker, and I worked as shelf stacker in supermarket and deli worker during the summer when I was student.
Throughout my working experience, I developed an open mind to take on responsibility. This would serve me every day and give a real vision of the work world. I became organized and thorough in my work.
I can do any work I set my mind to. The most important thing to me is work because inactivity does not appeal to me. The more I work, the more confidence I can build. I am independent, a hard worker and really enthusiastic. I'm a fast leaner and highly motivated. I'm fully available in the week and during the week-end. I'm ready to start working for you as soon as you need me to.
Feel free to contact me whenever you want.
PROFESSIONAL EXPERIENCE
Sept 2013 to May 2015 : Factory worker
To finance my travel to Australia I worked in a boiler factory (Usine de fabrication de chaudières)occupying various posts
June to August 2013: Shelf stocker (Rayon lessive)
Stocked shelves and managed stock rotation as necessary
Assisted customers with locating items when necessary
Managed inventory and store stocks
Nov 2012 to May 2013: Glass Collector
My task was to collect and clean glasses, sweap and mop the floor
Receive deliveries and stock them in the stock room
Then I worked at the reception of the locker room
Couples of months later I was in charge to explain at the new employees our way to work in the night club.
July-August 2012: Deli Worker (Traiteur supermarché)
Sliced and weighed deli meats and cheeses
Maintained and stocked all designated section areas
July-August 2010/2011: Shelf Stocker (Mise en rayon fruits et legumes)
Maintained and stocked all designated section areas in laundry
May-June 2011 : Design Office
Draw all the factory process to know where incorporate the next machines in the factory
July 2009 to August 2009 : Factory worker
Full time job as a food factory worker, occupying various posts.
July 2008 to August 2009 : Oyster picker
Summer job as an employee in an oyster exploitation in charge of the picking
EDUCTION AND QUALIFICATIONS
2010-2012: Vocational training certificate in Industrial Product Design
Two years after the French baccalaureat (equivalent to A ‘levels)
2008-2010: BTEC National Diploma in Microtechnics
2006-2008: BTEC First Diploma in Electronics
LANGUAGE AND SKILLS
Language:
French: mother tongue
English: fluent
Demonstrative:
Dynamic, adaptive, rigorous, able to work as a team as well as alone, multitasking skills and punctual.
INTEREST AND HOBBIES
Sports - I played football since I was 5 years old. I'm passionate about the sport and I like also follow the NBA and Tennis.
Traveling - United Kingdom, Japan, Spain
Je vous remercie!
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Modifié par lucile83 le 14-06-2015 07:57
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