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Message de jaziri86 posté le 15-10-2016 à 11:50:08 (S | E | F)
Bonjour
Pouvez-vous m'aider à corriger cette lettre de motivation s'il vous plait?
Merci d'avance pour vos réponses.
Dear Sir,
Actually a micro-finance employee in xxx, holding a Two year Technical degree in accounting and business management your company is presented today as a real space for the rest of my career; why it has retained all my attention.
The opportunity to work within your structure , those on different areas and among different teams benefit from the diverse perspectives of evolution and enriching as well as the opportunity to take real managerial responsibilities by participating in innovative projects are all of which have motivated my choice
Listen, Mastering my work environment, Reply has needs and communicate, is the approach that I have implemented in each of my previous missions. Including during my recent mission as Controller Accountant responsible for Producing the necessary financial statements, manage, secure funds and securities through the control of accounting machines and days of operations to improve the performance of work and satisfaction external customers in CECIC SA
I am aware that it will be for me a new experience. However the knowledge gained so far throughout my training and my experience, my curiosity my adaptability, my rigor and especially my interpersonal and communication skills are elements that allow me to easily integrate myself quickly and provide a value added my various work teams.
I would be very happy to meet you in an interview, during which you can get a better idea about my personality, my skills and my motivation.
Cordially
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Modifié par lucile83 le 15-10-2016 21:40
Message de jaziri86 posté le 15-10-2016 à 11:50:08 (S | E | F)
Bonjour
Pouvez-vous m'aider à corriger cette lettre de motivation s'il vous plait?
Merci d'avance pour vos réponses.
Dear Sir,
Actually a micro-finance employee in xxx, holding a Two year Technical degree in accounting and business management your company is presented today as a real space for the rest of my career; why it has retained all my attention.
The opportunity to work within your structure , those on different areas and among different teams benefit from the diverse perspectives of evolution and enriching as well as the opportunity to take real managerial responsibilities by participating in innovative projects are all of which have motivated my choice
Listen, Mastering my work environment, Reply has needs and communicate, is the approach that I have implemented in each of my previous missions. Including during my recent mission as Controller Accountant responsible for Producing the necessary financial statements, manage, secure funds and securities through the control of accounting machines and days of operations to improve the performance of work and satisfaction external customers in CECIC SA
I am aware that it will be for me a new experience. However the knowledge gained so far throughout my training and my experience, my curiosity my adaptability, my rigor and especially my interpersonal and communication skills are elements that allow me to easily integrate myself quickly and provide a value added my various work teams.
I would be very happy to meet you in an interview, during which you can get a better idea about my personality, my skills and my motivation.
Cordially
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Modifié par lucile83 le 15-10-2016 21:40
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