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Message de lil2919 posté le 03-05-2017 à 17:50:52 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
mon oral de Bac est dans une semaine et j'aurais voulu que vous me corrigiez ma préparation.
Merci pour vos réponses.
To be able to answer my problem: Is the American Dream still alive ? What attracts to immigrants to live in the Usa?
That is the first,I shall show grace as it interview with Alejandro that the American dream is always alive. Secondly, I shall explain what attracts the immigrants in the
USA by means of the document A human Smuggling Ship.
Alejandro is an immigrant who left this family and is country to have a better living conditions in America.
As many people, Alejandro joins the USA by hopping to have a better life with a
better job and a better paid.
His country of origin ,is indeed, very poor and he cannot live there with dignity.
The USA can offer to Alejandro and to his family of a new opportunities. His little boy to have a good education and access to culture in order to succes million Mexicans want to go to live in the USA.
The immigrants left their countries to start a new life because their lives in their
native countries were difficult, they're trying to escape war, poverty, joblessness.
The journey, is however very dangerous because boats are risked and their are often considered as of the cattle because the smugglers don't care about them.
In spite of a journey difficult and risked to reach the USA, the immigrants choose this country to have a better life. The American dream allows numerous people not to lose hope and to believe a better future.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 03-05-2017 21:29
Message de lil2919 posté le 03-05-2017 à 17:50:52 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
mon oral de Bac est dans une semaine et j'aurais voulu que vous me corrigiez ma préparation.
Merci pour vos réponses.
To be able to answer my problem: Is the American Dream still alive ? What attracts to immigrants to live in the Usa?
That is the first,I shall show grace as it interview with Alejandro that the American dream is always alive. Secondly, I shall explain what attracts the immigrants in the
USA by means of the document A human Smuggling Ship.
Alejandro is an immigrant who left this family and is country to have a better living conditions in America.
As many people, Alejandro joins the USA by hopping to have a better life with a
better job and a better paid.
His country of origin ,is indeed, very poor and he cannot live there with dignity.
The USA can offer to Alejandro and to his family of a new opportunities. His little boy to have a good education and access to culture in order to succes million Mexicans want to go to live in the USA.
The immigrants left their countries to start a new life because their lives in their
native countries were difficult, they're trying to escape war, poverty, joblessness.
The journey, is however very dangerous because boats are risked and their are often considered as of the cattle because the smugglers don't care about them.
In spite of a journey difficult and risked to reach the USA, the immigrants choose this country to have a better life. The American dream allows numerous people not to lose hope and to believe a better future.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 03-05-2017 21:29
Réponse : Bac/Myths and heroes de laure95, postée le 04-05-2017 à 10:53:44 (S | E)
Bonjour,
- What attracts to (pas de to)immigrants to live in the Usa?
- That is the first: ?
- I shall show grace as it interview with Alejandro: ?
- in the USA by means of the document A (enlever A)human Smuggling Ship.
Alejandro is an immigrant who left this (this = cette) family and is (is = est)country to have a (enlever a)better living
As many people, Alejandro joins (passé) the USA by (nelever by)hopping (une seul p)to have a better life
- a better paid: paid = payé
- The USA can offer to Alejandro and to his family of (pas de of)a new opportunities.
- His little boy to have a good education and access to culture: où est le verbe conjugué?
- to succes: success est nom, pas un verbe.
- million Mexicans want to go to (and pas to) live in the USA.
- The (pas de the) immigrants left their countries to start a new life
- because boats are risked (risky pas risked)and their (their = leur)are often considered
- a journey difficult and risked: ordre des mots.
- to reach the USA, the immigrants choose this country to have a better life: répétition.
- to believe (in) a better future.
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