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Message de emiliep posté le 17-12-2017 à 16:30:16 (S | E | F)
Bonjour tout le monde !
Quelqu'un avec énormément de gentillesse et de patience peut-il corriger mon devoir d'anglais s'il vous plaît?
Je serais très reconnaissante.
Dear supporters and friends, ladies and gentlemen,
I wish to thank you for the enthousiasm that you disclosed to our team and myself this week. I feel extremely honoured when I witnessed that my supporters tempted to reverse the on-going scandal that came-up two days ago. I wish, through this statement, to bring additional information about the last Olympic Committee findings following the bioanalyses made last Wednsday, I mean the day before yesterday. I have something important to tell you. I think about it everyday, every night, there is'nt any day who comes without I think of it. And that's hurting me. The thing is that I acknoledge that the rumour spread about the use of a black listed product, is confirmed. I was tasked to take a substance that could boost my performance, and, as you saw, I was granted access to the first place on the podium. This was the jury last Wednesday decision. However, today is a different day. I was declassified 10 minutes ago by the same jury for contervailing to the rules established by the Olympic Committee.
This last decision is fair. I would like to appologise to have disappointed those who hoped in our team. I, in full conscience, recognise this fact presented by the jury earlier this morning. . If you all knew how much I regrete what I did. I know that I lied at you all, that I've been dishonnest to you all. It torments me so much every second of my life.. But please, understand me, I was tired, tired of seeing all those athletes winning and succeed the race so easily. I was enough to make efforts everyday, to train everyday very hard, for lose at the end. I'm not proud. To me I shall never make it. I don't even believe that I did it.. It's so bad, so dispespectful. I know that I was very smilling, I appeared happy but inside I was broken and destroyed. I mainly deserve all your hate, the threats and insults which will follow immediately. I hate myself and I have to. You can't imagine how much I suffer to have been such a liar, a cheater... But my suffering isn't as painful as the one that I caused to you that's why I'm sincerely and deeply sorry of being such a disloyal person.
As per a direct consequence, I took the decision to quit entirely all kind of sport competitions. This means I will never run again under the Flag of my country. The jury decision affects me personnally, as I am not seen to date as a professional sportsman, but as a loser, a person that wanted a price without deserving it. I feel ashame toward you and those who dedicated all their time and ressources to my success. I want to tell you that I took decision to act against any form of dopping at sport and to become an activist who will promote fair sport in the spirit set initially by the rules. And I renounce, here in front of you and now, without appeal, to the price I got and I will subsequently return the Gold medal obtained last Wednesday.
All my thought are now to my supporters. I hope that you will forgive me for my stupid action.
Merci beaucoup !!
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Modifié par lucile83 le 17-12-2017 18:48
Message de emiliep posté le 17-12-2017 à 16:30:16 (S | E | F)
Bonjour tout le monde ! Quelqu'un avec énormément de gentillesse et de patience peut-il corriger mon devoir d'anglais s'il vous plaît?
Je serais très reconnaissante.
Dear supporters and friends, ladies and gentlemen,
I wish to thank you for the enthousiasm that you disclosed to our team and myself this week. I feel extremely honoured when I witnessed that my supporters tempted to reverse the on-going scandal that came-up two days ago. I wish, through this statement, to bring additional information about the last Olympic Committee findings following the bioanalyses made last Wednsday, I mean the day before yesterday. I have something important to tell you. I think about it everyday, every night, there is'nt any day who comes without I think of it. And that's hurting me. The thing is that I acknoledge that the rumour spread about the use of a black listed product, is confirmed. I was tasked to take a substance that could boost my performance, and, as you saw, I was granted access to the first place on the podium. This was the jury last Wednesday decision. However, today is a different day. I was declassified 10 minutes ago by the same jury for contervailing to the rules established by the Olympic Committee.
This last decision is fair. I would like to appologise to have disappointed those who hoped in our team. I, in full conscience, recognise this fact presented by the jury earlier this morning. . If you all knew how much I regrete what I did. I know that I lied at you all, that I've been dishonnest to you all. It torments me so much every second of my life.. But please, understand me, I was tired, tired of seeing all those athletes winning and succeed the race so easily. I was enough to make efforts everyday, to train everyday very hard, for lose at the end. I'm not proud. To me I shall never make it. I don't even believe that I did it.. It's so bad, so dispespectful. I know that I was very smilling, I appeared happy but inside I was broken and destroyed. I mainly deserve all your hate, the threats and insults which will follow immediately. I hate myself and I have to. You can't imagine how much I suffer to have been such a liar, a cheater... But my suffering isn't as painful as the one that I caused to you that's why I'm sincerely and deeply sorry of being such a disloyal person.
As per a direct consequence, I took the decision to quit entirely all kind of sport competitions. This means I will never run again under the Flag of my country. The jury decision affects me personnally, as I am not seen to date as a professional sportsman, but as a loser, a person that wanted a price without deserving it. I feel ashame toward you and those who dedicated all their time and ressources to my success. I want to tell you that I took decision to act against any form of dopping at sport and to become an activist who will promote fair sport in the spirit set initially by the rules. And I renounce, here in front of you and now, without appeal, to the price I got and I will subsequently return the Gold medal obtained last Wednesday.
All my thought are now to my supporters. I hope that you will forgive me for my stupid action.
Merci beaucoup !!
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Modifié par lucile83 le 17-12-2017 18:48
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