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Message de dz213 posté le 07-04-2019 à 14:45:09 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
pouvez-vous me corriger ma fiche sur la notion progrès s'il vous plait?
Merci pour vos réponses.
Introduction :
I'm going to talk about the notion «Progress». To begin with, I would like to state a definition of Progress. Progress is the idea that world and the society can envolve positively in terms of sciences, technology, modernization, ect. However, the idea of progress is still debate between those who consider that it's beneficale and those for whom it's harmful. To illustrate this notion I will talk about “the perfect man”.Can we find solution to human complexes throught progress ? First we will see human complexes and then we will see what are the solutions and the business create.
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The society aims at creating “The perfect Man”. More and more people want to do cosmetic surgery to look like magazine's mannequins. For exemple, we studied an extract from a novel entilted “The perfect Male” written by Don Delillo. David Bell is the narrator, he is narcissist, self-absorbed,self obsessed appearance. He pays a lot of attention to his physique. He mocks of his superior's squat physique and his film idols. He suggests that he is the best man because he has a better taste in looks. The document perfectly shows that some people absoulutely want to look like the perfect man. Also, with progress parents can create the “perfect baby”. Indeed, we studied an article from The Wall Street Journal entitled “A Baby Please ! Blon with Green Eyes”. It shows that parents can create a baby whose trits are selected according to what prospective parents require: gender, hair and eye color. Finally, society shows that men and women must belong to a category of norms.
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With progress, scientifics try to find solutions to human complexes. For instance, we studied a photography entitled “Chromosome”. It shows a tablet of three pills, one for health, one for beauty and one for intelligence. Pills are usually used when one is ill, to cure or alleviate suffering. If the fisrt pill may have an influence on health, it seems very unlikely that a pill can make someane look prettier or enhance their intelligence. An IQ of 175 is hardly credible. However, on the basic current scientific knowlede it is impossible to modify human chromosomes even with a long treatment. A pill might particularry improve someone's health, complexion or hair condition, but it certainely can't alter their IQ. Furthermore, commercial entreprise create business with progress. Indeed, we studied a photography entitled “The Pyramid of Hapiness”, it consists of a foundation and five differents levels of needs leading to the pinnacle. The target are parents of young children and they want to convice parents that is vital to fulfil all needs in the pyramid to guarantee their child's hapiness. The commercial entreprise manipulates parents and offers thel training to develop the needs of the pyramid for their children and then they create teir own business.
Conclusion:
To put in a nutshell, I think progress is neither all good or all bad. Put into the hands of human beaings, that knowledge can be used for medecine or great advances. Throught progress we can not find solutions to all human complexes like having an IQ of 175. New commercial entreprise build arround progress and creat their own business.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 07-04-2019 14:53
Message de dz213 posté le 07-04-2019 à 14:45:09 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
pouvez-vous me corriger ma fiche sur la notion progrès s'il vous plait?
Merci pour vos réponses.
Introduction :
I'm going to talk about the notion «Progress». To begin with, I would like to state a definition of Progress. Progress is the idea that world and the society can envolve positively in terms of sciences, technology, modernization, ect. However, the idea of progress is still debate between those who consider that it's beneficale and those for whom it's harmful. To illustrate this notion I will talk about “the perfect man”.Can we find solution to human complexes throught progress ? First we will see human complexes and then we will see what are the solutions and the business create.
I/
The society aims at creating “The perfect Man”. More and more people want to do cosmetic surgery to look like magazine's mannequins. For exemple, we studied an extract from a novel entilted “The perfect Male” written by Don Delillo. David Bell is the narrator, he is narcissist, self-absorbed,self obsessed appearance. He pays a lot of attention to his physique. He mocks of his superior's squat physique and his film idols. He suggests that he is the best man because he has a better taste in looks. The document perfectly shows that some people absoulutely want to look like the perfect man. Also, with progress parents can create the “perfect baby”. Indeed, we studied an article from The Wall Street Journal entitled “A Baby Please ! Blon with Green Eyes”. It shows that parents can create a baby whose trits are selected according to what prospective parents require: gender, hair and eye color. Finally, society shows that men and women must belong to a category of norms.
II/
With progress, scientifics try to find solutions to human complexes. For instance, we studied a photography entitled “Chromosome”. It shows a tablet of three pills, one for health, one for beauty and one for intelligence. Pills are usually used when one is ill, to cure or alleviate suffering. If the fisrt pill may have an influence on health, it seems very unlikely that a pill can make someane look prettier or enhance their intelligence. An IQ of 175 is hardly credible. However, on the basic current scientific knowlede it is impossible to modify human chromosomes even with a long treatment. A pill might particularry improve someone's health, complexion or hair condition, but it certainely can't alter their IQ. Furthermore, commercial entreprise create business with progress. Indeed, we studied a photography entitled “The Pyramid of Hapiness”, it consists of a foundation and five differents levels of needs leading to the pinnacle. The target are parents of young children and they want to convice parents that is vital to fulfil all needs in the pyramid to guarantee their child's hapiness. The commercial entreprise manipulates parents and offers thel training to develop the needs of the pyramid for their children and then they create teir own business.
Conclusion:
To put in a nutshell, I think progress is neither all good or all bad. Put into the hands of human beaings, that knowledge can be used for medecine or great advances. Throught progress we can not find solutions to all human complexes like having an IQ of 175. New commercial entreprise build arround progress and creat their own business.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 07-04-2019 14:53
Réponse : Oral/ progrès de gerondif, postée le 08-04-2019 à 12:55:55 (S | E)
Bonjour
erreurs en bleu
Introduction :
I'm going to talk(causer ?) about the notion «Progress». To begin with, I would like to state a definition of Progress. Progress is the idea that world and the society can envolve positively in terms of sciences, technology, modernization, ect. However, the idea of progress is still at debate between those who consider that it's beneficale and those for whom it's harmful. To illustrate this notion I will talk about “the perfect man”.Can we find solution(pluriel) to human complexes throught(orthographe) progress ? First we will see human complexes and then we will see what are the solutions (pas d'inversion en style indirect)and the business create.(nom ? verbe ?)
I/
The society aims at creating “The perfect Man”. More and more people want to do cosmetic surgery to look like magazine's mannequins(a model est en chair et en os, a mannequin en plastique dans la vitrine !!). For exemple, we studied an extract from a novel entilted “The perfect Male” written by Don Delillo. David Bell is the narrator, he is a narcissist, self-absorbed,self obsessed appearance(mal construit, ce nom accroché à rien). He pays a lot of attention to his physique. He mocks of his superior's squat physique and his film idols. He suggests that he is the best man because he has a better taste in looks. The document perfectly shows that some people absoulutely want to look like the perfect man. Also, with progress parents can create the “perfect baby”. Indeed, we studied an article from The Wall Street Journal entitled “A Baby Please ! Blon with Green Eyes”. It shows that parents can create a baby whose trits are selected according to what prospective parents require: gender, hair and eye color. Finally, society shows that men and women must belong to a category of norms.
II/
With progress, scientifics try to find solutions to human complexes. For instance, we studied a photography(a photograph est en papier, photography est une science) entitled “Chromosome”. It shows a tablet of three pills, one for health, one for beauty and one for intelligence. Pills are usually used when one is ill, to cure or alleviate suffering. If the fisrt pill may have an influence on health, it seems very unlikely that a pill can make someane look prettier or enhance their intelligence. An IQ of 175 is hardly credible. However, on the basic current scientific knowlede it is impossible to modify human chromosomes even with a long treatment. A pill might particularry improve someone's health, complexion or hair condition, but it certainely can't alter their IQ. Furthermore, commercial entreprise(pluriel) create business with progress.(je ne sais pas si ces prises de position apportent quelque chose au débat) Indeed, we studied a photography entitled “The Pyramid of Hapiness”, it consists of a foundation and five differents(adjectifs invariables) levels of needs leading to the pinnacle. The target are parents of young children and they want to convice parents that it is vital to fulfil all needs in the pyramid to guarantee their child's happiness. The commercial entreprise manipulates parents and offers them training to develop the needs of the pyramid for their children and then they create teir own business.
Conclusion:
To put it in a nutshell, I think progress is neither all good or all bad. Put into the hands of human beaings, that knowledge can be used for medecine or great advances. Throught progress we can not( en un seul mot) find solutions to all human complexes like having an IQ of 175(avoir un Qi de 175 n'est pas un complexe, c'est le désir de l'avoir qui en est un). New commercial entreprise(pluriel) build arround progress and creat their own business. (En quoi cette dernière phrase apporte-t-elle quelque chose ?)
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