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Message de hayti posté le 24-05-2019 à 19:04:54 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
s'il vous plaîtaidez moi pouvez-vous m'aider à corriger mes erreurs?
Merci d'avance.
The use of bicycles as a means of transport have many advantages and disadvantages, bicycle are an inexpensive form of transport. In other words, the cost of using bicycle is cheaper than the cost of using other means of transport. Also, the usage of bikes is good for the rider's health thanks to its benefits as a kind of sports. Besides, chosing bicycle as a means of transportation is good not only for the rider's health. But also for the other people's health. In the other terms, when we utilize bicycle instead of bus, cars or motorcycle, we protect the environment from the poisonous elements that content diesel. Although these advantages, the use of velocipedes as kind of transport have many disadvantages. For example riding bicycle in bad weather or for a long distance is not practical at all. This is due to the important efforts made by the rider compared with driver's efforts. Moreover, the use of bicycles on busy roads may not be safe and might causes accidents. To sum up, each one can choose the way of transportation he or che like to use, based on his or her personal reasons.
Merci infiniment.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 24-05-2019 22:36
Message de hayti posté le 24-05-2019 à 19:04:54 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
s'il vous plaît
Merci d'avance.
The use of bicycles as a means of transport have many advantages and disadvantages, bicycle are an inexpensive form of transport. In other words, the cost of using bicycle is cheaper than the cost of using other means of transport. Also, the usage of bikes is good for the rider's health thanks to its benefits as a kind of sports. Besides, chosing bicycle as a means of transportation is good not only for the rider's health. But also for the other people's health. In the other terms, when we utilize bicycle instead of bus, cars or motorcycle, we protect the environment from the poisonous elements that content diesel. Although these advantages, the use of velocipedes as kind of transport have many disadvantages. For example riding bicycle in bad weather or for a long distance is not practical at all. This is due to the important efforts made by the rider compared with driver's efforts. Moreover, the use of bicycles on busy roads may not be safe and might causes accidents. To sum up, each one can choose the way of transportation he or che like to use, based on his or her personal reasons.
Merci infiniment.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 24-05-2019 22:36
Réponse : Bicycles/help de gerondif, postée le 24-05-2019 à 20:15:14 (S | E)
Bonjour
erreurs en bleu
The use of bicycles as a means of transportation have(singulier!) many advantages and disadvantages, bicycle(pluriel) are an inexpensive form of transportation. In other words, the cost of using a bicycle is cheaper than the cost of using other means of transportation(un coût peut être moindre mais pas moins cher). Also(maladroit), the usage(the use of) of bikes is good for the rider's health thanks to its benefits as a kind of sports. Besides, choosing bicycle as a means of transportation is good not only for the rider's health. But also for the other people's health. In the other terms (in other words est plus courant), when we utilize(use) bicycle instead of bus, cars or motorcycle, we protect the environment from the poisonous elements that content diesel(inversez). Although(bien que ne convient pas ici) these advantages, the use of velocipedes (archi-démodé)as kind of transportation have(singulier) many disadvantages. For example riding a bicycle in bad weather or for a long distance is not practical at all. This is due to the important efforts made by the rider compared with a driver's efforts. Moreover, the use of bicycles on busy roads may not be safe and might causes(infiitif) accidents. To sum up, each one can choose the way of transportation he or che like (3ème personne du présent)to use, based on his or her personal reasons.
Réponse : Bicycles/help de hayti, postée le 25-05-2019 à 09:06:03 (S | E)
Bonjour, thanks so much.
Réponse : Bicycles/help de here4u, postée le 25-05-2019 à 14:25:25 (S | E)
Hello!
Comme l'a indiqué gerondif
, attention de bien corriger tous les "bicycles are"/ or "A bicycle" is/ or plus facile et plus simplement, "cycling is"."means of transport" est
et "of transportation" = 
Réponse : Bicycles/help de hayti, postée le 28-05-2019 à 15:04:30 (S | E)
Bonjour
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