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Message de aymengu posté le 29-06-2019 à 00:39:57 (S | E | F)
Hello,
In order to my improve my English, I have done this exercise.
Please feel free to indicate me my numerous mistakes. Do not hesitate also to give me your general opinion about my work. This will help me a lot
Thanks for any reply.
Subject: Write to a customer to tell them that the product/service they want is not available at the moment.
Dear Customer,
Unfortunately, our new model of personal Computer that you asked for, is currently unavailable. However, we will receive further models in the next week. Likewise, our brand offers also other computers that may interested you. That is why I decided to join to this email our catalogue.
Please feel free to contact me if you have any question.
Best regards,
Mr Sam
Director of sales
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Modifié par lucile83 le 29-06-2019 07:14
Message de aymengu posté le 29-06-2019 à 00:39:57 (S | E | F)
Hello,
In order to my improve my English, I have done this exercise.
Please feel free to indicate me my numerous mistakes. Do not hesitate also to give me your general opinion about my work. This will help me a lot
Thanks for any reply.
Subject: Write to a customer to tell them that the product/service they want is not available at the moment.
Dear Customer,
Unfortunately, our new model of personal Computer that you asked for, is currently unavailable. However, we will receive further models in the next week. Likewise, our brand offers also other computers that may interested you. That is why I decided to join to this email our catalogue.
Please feel free to contact me if you have any question.
Best regards,
Mr Sam
Director of sales
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Modifié par lucile83 le 29-06-2019 07:14
Réponse : Formal email/aide de traviskidd, postée le 30-06-2019 à 06:29:32 (S | E)
Hello; your mistakes aren't so numerous
Mistakes in blue, suggestions in green.
Dear Customer,
Unfortunately, our new model of personal Computer that you asked for, is currently unavailable. However, we will receive further models in the next week. Likewise, our brand offers also other computers that may interested you. (That is why I decided to join) Therefore, please find attached to this e-mail our catalogue.
Please feel free to contact me if you have any questions.
Best regards,
(Mr)John Sam
Director of sales
Réponse : Formal email/aide de aymengu, postée le 01-07-2019 à 18:22:43 (S | E)
Thank you for your help !!
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