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Message de jane37 posté le 01-11-2019 à 09:38:31 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous.
Je me permets de vous proposer en lecture et en correction, un petit texte afin de répondre à la question qui m'est posée, "Pourriez vous vivre sans votre téléphone portable ?"
J'ai des doutes au niveau de certaines expressions🤔;
Merci beaucoup.
My Smartphone, my Buddy
When I look at you,
First, I see a black mirror screen.
All night you have recharged,
So, now, you are ready…
Ready
to receive my fingers contacting you.
A secret code opens your actions…
Here you are ready my Buddy
To Inform me, warn me, call me back
Cultivate me, make me play, search for me, communicate to me, Photograph me and the others.
You let me choose the music, the colors, the formats,
the silence, or vibrations.
You can be discreet and you also know how to hide yourself.
You are often astray, but never lost.
Ah! I was going to forget,
Thanks to you, I can call someone when I am happy, or if I am sad.
You know how to keep the secrets if I ask you it.
if I took care of you before,
Where I go, you always come with me,
you never tell me no .
My phone, you are smart
So from you, my Buddy,
I can’t do without.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 01-11-2019 14:24
Message de jane37 posté le 01-11-2019 à 09:38:31 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous.
Je me permets de vous proposer en lecture et en correction, un petit texte afin de répondre à la question qui m'est posée, "Pourriez vous vivre sans votre téléphone portable ?"
J'ai des doutes au niveau de certaines expressions🤔;
Merci beaucoup.
My Smartphone, my Buddy
When I look at you,
First, I see a black mirror screen.
All night you have recharged,
So, now, you are ready…
Ready
to receive my fingers contacting you.
A secret code opens your actions…
Here you are ready my Buddy
To Inform me, warn me, call me back
Cultivate me, make me play, search for me, communicate to me, Photograph me and the others.
You let me choose the music, the colors, the formats,
the silence, or vibrations.
You can be discreet and you also know how to hide yourself.
You are often astray, but never lost.
Ah! I was going to forget,
Thanks to you, I can call someone when I am happy, or if I am sad.
You know how to keep the secrets if I ask you it.
if I took care of you before,
Where I go, you always come with me,
you never tell me no .
My phone, you are smart
So from you, my Buddy,
I can’t do without.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 01-11-2019 14:24
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