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Message de lesentier posté le 01-10-2021 à 14:44:28 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous,
j'espère que la rentrée s'est bien passée pour tout le monde
Je voudrais savoir si une bonne âme pourrait m'informer d'erreurs que j'aurais oublié de corriger dans ce petit texte...
Merci beaucoup d'avance
Lesentier
In Amish Country, the Futur Is Calling
When we thing about Amish, we imagine there life in middle of country, as in episode of The Little House On The Prairie… However, when we read the article of Kevin Granville and Ashley Gilbertsonsept, we note the capitalisme influe also on Amish communities.
The article explain how and why the Amish begin to use technologic object as everybody. Because of a largeous augmentation of the population of the Amish (more 150% in 25 years !), these latter had to live around city. So because they can’t live by farming, they were to live around city, as New-York. This is the reason why we can see Amish use cell-phones, or work in sectors of industrie.
Howether, the article explain also the woring of several Amish about this evolution. They are always really careful about technology. For instance, they use taxis in urban place to don’t possece a car, or the use phones just for job (by the bye, Amish are very affraid by pornography).
To conclude, the article talk about an evolution in life style of Amish. These community is impacted by occidantals life style, but they are careful by usage of technologies, and for somebody, realy against.
Message de lesentier posté le 01-10-2021 à 14:44:28 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous,
j'espère que la rentrée s'est bien passée pour tout le monde
Je voudrais savoir si une bonne âme pourrait m'informer d'erreurs que j'aurais oublié de corriger dans ce petit texte...
Merci beaucoup d'avance
Lesentier
In Amish Country, the Futur Is Calling
When we thing about Amish, we imagine there life in middle of country, as in episode of The Little House On The Prairie… However, when we read the article of Kevin Granville and Ashley Gilbertsonsept, we note the capitalisme influe also on Amish communities.
The article explain how and why the Amish begin to use technologic object as everybody. Because of a largeous augmentation of the population of the Amish (more 150% in 25 years !), these latter had to live around city. So because they can’t live by farming, they were to live around city, as New-York. This is the reason why we can see Amish use cell-phones, or work in sectors of industrie.
Howether, the article explain also the woring of several Amish about this evolution. They are always really careful about technology. For instance, they use taxis in urban place to don’t possece a car, or the use phones just for job (by the bye, Amish are very affraid by pornography).
To conclude, the article talk about an evolution in life style of Amish. These community is impacted by occidantals life style, but they are careful by usage of technologies, and for somebody, realy against.
Réponse : Correction/texte de gerondif, postée le 01-10-2021 à 14:55:05 (S | E)
Bonjour
C'est assez horrible, relisez-vous, enlevez les mots français ou les mots estropiés en français que le traducteur n'aura pas reconnu.
Mettez des s aux présents 3e personne du singulier.
Ce texte fait très "français traduit".
Réponse : Correction/texte de lesentier, postée le 01-10-2021 à 16:45:31 (S | E)
Rebonjour,
Si je m'étais contenté de traduire un texte en anglais sur un traducteur en ligne, je n'aurais pris le soin de demander de l'aide ici.
Je vois que j'ai été servi, je remercie votre franchise. Je relirai mon texte. Je l'ai tapé après beaucoup de travail, peut-être n'étais-je pas assez concentré.
Bien cordialement et merci à vous.
Réponse : Correction/texte de lucile83, postée le 01-10-2021 à 18:15:33 (S | E)
Hello,
Erreurs en bleu.
Je vous donne un aperçu des fautes et vous essaierez de corriger; y compris le nom Ashley Gilbertsonsept.
When we thing about Amish, we imagine there life in ... middle of ... country, as in ... episode of The Little House On The Prairie… However, when we read the article of Kevin Granville and Ashley Gilbertsonsept, we note the capitalisme influe also on Amish communities.
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