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Message de here4u posté le 01-03-2025 à 16:56:58 (S | E | F)
Hello dear Friends!
Another easy exercice that everyone can do!
Je sais que l'Expression libre est la compétence la plus difficile à bien acquérir dans l'apprentissage d'une langue, même si elle est notre langue maternelle, d'ailleurs...
Certains m’avaient dit être gênés d’exprimer des idées personnelles (surtout qu’ils avaient l’impression – souvent fausse – de les exprimer maladroitement. ) Cependant, je ne vous demande pas de " raconter votre vie " si vous ne le désirez pas... Je souhaite juste vous voir vous exprimer sur tout sujet aussi " librement " que possible.
De plus, je pense que vous aurez maintenant compris que pour moi, toute expression, même maladroite, est intéressante et a de la valeur. Elle nous stimule tous à " trouver mieux " !
Voici les questions auxquelles vous pourrez répondre :
1) « Is it easy for you to say: «No, sorry, I can’t!»?
2) Could you live for one day without a watch? without your cellphone?
3) In your opinion, why do some people steal?
4) What is your idea of ideal parents?
Vous pouvez choisir 1 ou 2 questions au choix – en notant bien les références - et développer celle(s) que vous voulez, jusqu’à atteindre en tout un maximum d’environ 150 mots.
Envoyez-moi vos réponses en mp et je publierai une première série que vous 'corrigerez' (en bleu d’abord pendant deux jours) puis en vert… Une fois la première réponse corrigée au mieux, je publierai ensuite la deuxième série... (sans changements donc !) Vous gagnez de la liberté (celle de ne pas parler de plusieurs sujets, ceux qui ne vous " inspirent pas "... Vous écrivez la longueur que vous voulez, vous pouvez choisir d'inventer, de plaisanter, ou de répondre avec sérieux... Nous vous suivrons !
Cet exercice sera pour vous un
ou en fonction de la qualité de vos écrits et des difficultés (surmontées) dans la prestation...
Cet exercice sera corrigé (j'espère !)le mercredi 12 mars 2025 ! Go for it! with THE FORCE.
Message de here4u posté le 01-03-2025 à 16:56:58 (S | E | F)
Hello dear Friends!
Another easy exercice that everyone can do!
Je sais que l'Expression libre est la compétence la plus difficile à bien acquérir dans l'apprentissage d'une langue, même si elle est notre langue maternelle, d'ailleurs...
Certains m’avaient dit être gênés d’exprimer des idées personnelles (surtout qu’ils avaient l’impression – souvent fausse – de les exprimer maladroitement.
) Cependant, je ne vous demande pas de " raconter votre vie " si vous ne le désirez pas... Je souhaite juste vous voir vous exprimer sur tout sujet aussi " librement " que possible. De plus, je pense que vous aurez maintenant compris que pour moi, toute expression, même maladroite, est intéressante et a de la valeur. Elle nous stimule tous à " trouver mieux " !
Voici les questions auxquelles vous pourrez répondre :
1) « Is it easy for you to say: «No, sorry, I can’t!»?
2) Could you live for one day without a watch? without your cellphone?
3) In your opinion, why do some people steal?
4) What is your idea of ideal parents?
Vous pouvez choisir 1 ou 2 questions au choix – en notant bien les références - et développer celle(s) que vous voulez, jusqu’à atteindre en tout un maximum d’environ 150 mots.
Envoyez-moi vos réponses en mp et je publierai une première série que vous 'corrigerez' (en bleu d’abord pendant deux jours) puis en vert… Une fois la première réponse corrigée au mieux, je publierai ensuite la deuxième série... (sans changements donc !
) Vous gagnez de la liberté (celle de ne pas parler de plusieurs sujets, ceux qui ne vous " inspirent pas "... Vous écrivez la longueur que vous voulez, vous pouvez choisir d'inventer, de plaisanter, ou de répondre avec sérieux... Nous vous suivrons !Cet exercice sera pour vous un
ou en fonction de la qualité de vos écrits et des difficultés (surmontées) dans la prestation...Cet exercice sera corrigé (j'espère !)le mercredi 12 mars 2025 ! Go for it! with THE FORCE.
Réponse : Let's Suggest/ 81 - Taking it easy/ 27 de here4u, postée le 02-03-2025 à 21:46:11 (S | E)
Hello, dear Friends,
ANSWER A: topic2 please, indicate possible mistakes and underline what looks clumsy.
I live without mobile phones since they have become so sophisticated that I am unable to use them. You can explain to me 15 times how it works, I don't even know how to answer when it rings. I click, I press, I rub, I touch it and it gives me squares of all colours and nothing that I need. I'm fine without it.
As for watches, I don't have them for the good reason, that they don't work on me. A watch on my wrist of any kind works perfectly for 8 days then it starts to lag for minutes, and stops completely after a month. I've been living without a watch forever. I look at the time on the kitchen oven door. When I am outside, there is always a clock on a church tower or the façade of a public building. I never arrive late for appointments.
Thanks for your help!
Réponse : Let's Suggest/ 81 - Taking it easy/ 27 de happynutmeg13, postée le 03-03-2025 à 08:58:17 (S | E)
Hello!
I can't see anything wrong in this text... What's more, it’s funny!
Réponse : Let's Suggest/ 81 - Taking it easy/ 27 de gerold, postée le 03-03-2025 à 09:18:09 (S | E)
Hello!
ANSWER A: topic2 please, indicate possible mistakes and underline what looks clumsy.
I live without mobile phones since they have become so sophisticated that I am unable to use them. You can explain to me 15 times how it works, I don't even know how to answer when it rings. I click, I press, I rub, I touch it and it gives me squares of all colours and nothing that I need. I'm fine without it.
As for watches, I don't have them for the good reason, that they don't work on me. A watch on my wrist of any kind works perfectly for 8 days then it starts to lag for minutes, and stops completely after a month. I've been living without a watch forever. I look at the time on the kitchen oven door (not sure). When I am outside, there is always a clock on a church tower or the façade of a public building. I never arrive late for appointments.
Réponse : Let's Suggest/ 81 - Taking it easy/ 27 de magie8, postée le 03-03-2025 à 09:58:23 (S | E)
hello mes suggestions selon les indications de Gerold merci a tous
Réponse : Let's Suggest81 t0pic 2
ANSWER A: topic2
I have been living without mobile phones since they ( became so sophisticated that I am unable to use them. You can explain to me 15 times how it works, I don't even know how to answer when it rings. I click, I press, I rub, I touch it and it gives me squares of all colours and nothing that I need. I'm fine without it.
As for watches, I don't have them for the good reason, that they don't work on me.
On my wrist, a watch of any kind works perfectly for 8 days then it starts to lag for minutes, and stops completely after a month. I've been living without a watch forever. I look at the time on the kitchen oven door (not sure). When I am outside, there is always a clock on a church tower or the façade of a public building. I never arrive late for appointments.
Réponse : Let's Suggest/ 81 - Taking it easy/ 27 de gerold, postée le 04-03-2025 à 16:13:24 (S | E)
Hello!
Magie!Réponse : Let's Suggest81 t0pic 2
ANSWER A: topic2
I have been living without mobile phones since they ( became so sophisticated that I am unable to use them. You can explain to me 15 times how
As for watches, I don't have them for the good reason
On my wrist, a watch of any kind works perfectly for 8 days then it starts to lag for minutes, and stops completely after a month. I've been living without a watch forever. I look at the time on the kitchen oven door**. When I am outside, there is always a clock on a church tower or the façade of a public building. I never arrive late for appointments.
* I find "it" inappropriate because of the plural (phones) in the previous sentence.
**I have doubts about the syntax, but perhaps I am mistaken. I'd say "the oven door in the kitchen".
Réponse : Let's Suggest/ 81 - Taking it easy/ 27 de here4u, postée le 05-03-2025 à 09:36:49 (S | E)
Hello dears,
Thanks a lot for your suggestions!
Here is ANSWER B: (a different approach on the same topic)Please, indicate possible mistakes and underline what looks clumsy...
Topic 2: 'Could you live for one day without a watch? Without your cellphone'
When I started writing my answer, I first overlooked 'for one day'... Which of course makes things very different! For 'one day' is not such a big deal, is it ?
First, let's forget about the watch: one day without knowing the right time could even be an interesting experiment!
My cellphone... That's the real issue! One day will be a maximum! I confess I have become what you may call a stupid addict to it, always urgently checking something extraordinarily important on the Internet: this includes dayly weather reports (preferably on different sites), reviews on books or movies I'll maybe never read or watch, silly but nevertheless funny videos about pets !... Twenty years or so ago, somebody said that in a very close future everyone would have a phone in their handbags; this had infuriated me: I was so sure I would never be trapped !... Shame on me!
for your help!Réponse : Let's Suggest/ 81 - Taking it easy/ 27 de gerold, postée le 06-03-2025 à 16:33:33 (S | E)
Hello!
Here is ANSWER B: (a different approach on the same topic)Please, indicate possible mistakes and underline what looks clumsy...
Topic 2: 'Could you live for one day without a watch? Without your cellphone'
Not much to say
When I started writing my answer, I first overlooked 'for one day'... Which of course makes things very different! For 'one day' is not such a big deal, is it ?
First, let's forget about the watch: one day without knowing the right time could even be an interesting experiment ( or experience
, I'm not sure)My cellphone... That's the real issue! One day will be a maximum! I confess I have become what you may call a stupid addict to it, always urgently checking something extraordinarily important on the Internet: this includes dayly weather reports (preferably on different sites), reviews on books or movies I'll maybe never read or watch, silly but nevertheless funny videos about pets !... Twenty years or so ago, somebody said that in a very close future everyone would have a phone in their handbags; this had infuriated me: I was so sure I would never be trapped !... Shame on me!
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Modifié par gerold le 06-03-2025 21:21
Réponse : Let's Suggest/ 81 - Taking it easy/ 27 de here4u, postée le 08-03-2025 à 10:39:48 (S | E)
Hello dears,
Green required!
Thanks for your help! Réponse : Let's Suggest/ 81 - Taking it easy/ 27 de happynutmeg13, postée le 08-03-2025 à 13:27:28 (S | E)
Thank you gerold and Here4U!
When I started writing my answer, I first overlooked 'for one day'... Which of course makes things very different! For 'one day' is not such a big deal, is it ?
First, let's forget
My cellphone... That's the real issue! One day will be a maximum! I confess I have become what you may call a stupid addict to* it, always urgently checking something extraordinarily important on the Internet: this includes dayly daily weather reports (preferably on different sites), reviews on books or movies I'll maybe never read or watch, silly but nevertheless funny videos about pets !... Twenty years or so ago, somebody said that in a very close future everyone would have a phone in their handbags; this had infuriated me: I was so sure I would never be trapped !... Shame on me!
I can't see any solution... Maybe: 'I have become stupidly addicted to it'
Réponse : Let's Suggest/ 81 - Taking it easy/ 27 de here4u, postée le 08-03-2025 à 14:03:44 (S | E)
Hello dears,
Here are my indications...When I started writing my answer, I first overlooked 'for one day'... Which of course makes things very different! For 'one day' is not such a big deal, is it ?
First, let's forget
My cellphone... That's the real issue! One day will be a maximum! I confess I have become what you may call a stupid addict to* it, always urgently checking something extraordinarily important on the Internet: this includes dayly daily weather reports (preferably on different sites), reviews on books or movies I'll maybe never read or watch, silly but nevertheless funny videos about pets !... Twenty years or so ago, somebody said that in a very close future everyone would have a phone in their handbags; this had infuriated me: I was so sure I would never be trapped !... Shame on me!
A good expression.
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