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Message de ilies972madinin posté le 30-03-2025 à 13:42:43 (S | E | F)
HEllo, i have a cover letter to do for an Europpean section in high school, and i need somebody to correct me please,
Bonjour, j'ai une lettre de motivation a faire pour une section europpeenne au lycée et j'ai besoin de quuelqu'un pour me corriger s'il vous plait
LA lettre:
i'm writing to you to show you my motivation for applying for the European-English
section in your high school () . I’m 14 and I’m currently a 9th grade student (3°) at middle school ().
I want to improve my English as much as possible for many reasons :
First, it could give me the possibility of travelling around the world in the future because
I think that English is the most primordial language for travelling due to its internationalization. Second, it could afford me to develop capacity that are necessary in some of my dream job ( astronomist, international trade...) . And finally, this section could give me the chance to integrate your high school which has a big interest for me due of its astronomical club because in the future i would be astronomist and this club is an exclusivity of your highschool. I also think that history is a very important school subject and other European-Section don’t include the history in it (like the Jules-Haag middle school’s).
I know that this section require more work, less time to enjoy with friends or either with family but I’m hard-working so it’s no matter for me. It could be a very interesting opportunity for me and my future.
Thank you in advance for your consideration. If you have any questions, don’t hesitate to join me by phone or mail,
Sincerely,
Merci d'avance pour la correction😊
Message de ilies972madinin posté le 30-03-2025 à 13:42:43 (S | E | F)
HEllo, i have a cover letter to do for an Europpean section in high school, and i need somebody to correct me please,
Bonjour, j'ai une lettre de motivation a faire pour une section europpeenne au lycée et j'ai besoin de quuelqu'un pour me corriger s'il vous plait
LA lettre:
i'm writing to you to show you my motivation for applying for the European-English
section in your high school () . I’m 14 and I’m currently a 9th grade student (3°) at middle school ().
I want to improve my English as much as possible for many reasons :
First, it could give me the possibility of travelling around the world in the future because
I think that English is the most primordial language for travelling due to its internationalization. Second, it could afford me to develop capacity that are necessary in some of my dream job ( astronomist, international trade...) . And finally, this section could give me the chance to integrate your high school which has a big interest for me due of its astronomical club because in the future i would be astronomist and this club is an exclusivity of your highschool. I also think that history is a very important school subject and other European-Section don’t include the history in it (like the Jules-Haag middle school’s).
I know that this section require more work, less time to enjoy with friends or either with family but I’m hard-working so it’s no matter for me. It could be a very interesting opportunity for me and my future.
Thank you in advance for your consideration. If you have any questions, don’t hesitate to join me by phone or mail,
Sincerely,
Merci d'avance pour la correction😊
Réponse : Cover letter to improve ( URGENT ) de gerondif, postée le 31-03-2025 à 09:55:17 (S | E)
Bonjour
Soignez quelques détails. I s’écrit toujours en majuscules au sens de je. Mettez un s au présent troisième personne du singulier...
lettre:
I'm writing to you to show you my motivation for applying for the European-English
section in your high school () . I’m 14 and I’m currently a 9th grade student (3°) at middle school ().
I want to improve my English as much as possible for many reasons :
First, it could give me the possibility ( to travel) of travelling around the world in the future because
I think that English is (primordial est déjà un superlatif en soi, ce qui est primordial est le plus important) the most primordial language for travelling due to its internationalization. Second, it could afford( afford ́ne va pas, mettez allow) me to develop ( the + pluriel) capacity that are necessary in some of my dream job ( pluriel)( astronomist, international trade...) . And finally, this section could give me the chance(the opportunity sera mieux by chance signifie par hasard) to integrate your high school which has a big interest for me ( formule maladroite) due of its astronomical club because in the future I would like to be AN astronomist(voir correction de gerold) and this club is an exclusivity of your highschool. I also think that history is a very important school subject and other European-SectionS don’t include history in it(in their syllabus, on ne sait pas ce que it représente) (like ( like ne convient pas, ce n’est pas une comparaison)the Jules-Haag middle school’s).
I know that this section requireS more work from me and will leave me less time to enjoy either with friends or with family but I’m hard-working so it’s no matter for me. It could be a very interesting opportunity for me and my future.
Thank you in advance for your consideration. If you have any questions, don’t hesitate to join me by phone or mail,
Sincerely,
Réponse : Cover letter to improve ( URGENT ) de ilies972madinin, postée le 31-03-2025 à 13:33:40 (S | E)
merci beaucoup pour cette correction
Réponse : Cover letter to improve ( URGENT ) de gerold, postée le 31-03-2025 à 13:47:48 (S | E)
Bonjour
AstronomER, pas astronomist.
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