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Message de junglist posté le 25-02-2008 à 11:31:33 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Je suis étudiant en école de commerce et dans le cadre de mes études je dois effectuer un stage à l'étranger. Pour cela j'ai rédigé une lettre de motivation "non adressée" et un CV. Et je voulais avoir votre avis sur la clarté des documents. Merci beaucoup pour l'aide que vous pourriez m'apporter.
Prénom NOM
adress(en francais)
adress(en francais)
Residence "en francais"
75000 PARIS
Tel. : +33 1 xx xx xx xx
Cell. : +33 6 xx xx xx xx
E-mail : ***@****pour votre sécurité, les adresses emails sont interdites sur le site, merci de communiquer par messages privés****
14 February 2008
Dear Madam/Sir
APPLICATION FOR WORK PLACEMENT
I am currently studying in Second Year at « ecole de commerce xxx » of Paris in France.
As part of my studies, I am looking for a 2 months (or more) work placement in a foreign country between April 15th, 2008 and September 1st, 2008.
The purpose of this work placement is to complete and increase with experience of the practical application of theoretical knowledge I have already acquired on Marketing, canvassing, database customers development, import/export.
Working for a company such as yours would be for me a honour and a real challenge, which is why I am eager to apply for a position.
I am particularly interested in E-marketing and import/export and I would be happy to integrate your company to put my capability of working in team,my enthusiasm, my sense of responsibility and all of my skills and knowledge at your service.
I perfectly know that this opportunity constitutes an advantage for my career, and that will enable me to gain more knowledge in international business practise which I need.
I would appreciate it if you would read my attached CV and grant me an interview when convenient.
I thank you for your consideration and remain at your disposal for any further information. You can contact my business school at : Lien Internet
.
I look forward to hearing from you in the near future.
Yours faithfully
_______________________________________________________________________
NOM Prénom
(signature)
Prenom NOM
adress
Résidence « xxx »
75 000 PARIS
E.mail : xxxxxx@xxxx.fr
Tel : +33 4 ...
Cell. : +33 6 ...
Né le :
Paris (75) France
Single
Driving licence
EDUCATION
2007 – 2008
Second Years at « ecole de commerce » (Paris)
2006 – 2007
Deug Sciences-Economiques (Two years at the faculty of Science-economic of the University of Montpellier 1)
2004 – 2005
Licence 1 – informatics (One year at the Faculty of Sciences of the University of Montpellier 2)
2003 – 2004
BAC-S (equivalent: A-Levels: Maths, Physics, Biology) at Lycée Pompidou secondary school in Castelnau-Le-Lez (France)
WORK EXPERIENCE
2007 (July/August)
Advertising department, hypermarket E.LECLERC St Aunès (34)
Advertising creation.
2003 à 2007
Part-time work at xxx (french temporary work agency) – Lunel (34).
2002 – 2003 (July/August)
Layout of a shop (Do-it-yourself shop). Selling, receipting, consumer adviser.
Company xx and M. xxx. Le xxx (34).
2001 (August)
Waiter. Hotel « Côte d’Azur » Le Lavandou (83).
LANGUAGE SKILLS
French: Mother tongue.
- English: Average level in conversational and business English.
- Spanish: Average level in conversational and business Spanish.
-Chinese: Basic knowledge of Chinese.
COMPUTING SKILLS
Complete mastery of : Word, Excel, PowerPoint, computer network tools and internet.
Operating system : Winows, Linux, Mac.
Software : Image and sound, (Cubase, Soundforge, Photoshop,...) for personal use.
INTEREST
Informatics-multimedia
Guitar, music.
Extreme sports.
Photography.
My friends.
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Modifié par bridg le 25-02-2008 11:32
CV / Divers
Message de junglist posté le 25-02-2008 à 11:31:33 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Je suis étudiant en école de commerce et dans le cadre de mes études je dois effectuer un stage à l'étranger. Pour cela j'ai rédigé une lettre de motivation "non adressée" et un CV. Et je voulais avoir votre avis sur la clarté des documents. Merci beaucoup pour l'aide que vous pourriez m'apporter.
Prénom NOM
adress(en francais)
adress(en francais)
Residence "en francais"
75000 PARIS
Tel. : +33 1 xx xx xx xx
Cell. : +33 6 xx xx xx xx
E-mail : ***@****pour votre sécurité, les adresses emails sont interdites sur le site, merci de communiquer par messages privés****
14 February 2008
Dear Madam/Sir
APPLICATION FOR WORK PLACEMENT
I am currently studying in Second Year at « ecole de commerce xxx » of Paris in France.
As part of my studies, I am looking for a 2 months (or more) work placement in a foreign country between April 15th, 2008 and September 1st, 2008.
The purpose of this work placement is to complete and increase with experience of the practical application of theoretical knowledge I have already acquired on Marketing, canvassing, database customers development, import/export.
Working for a company such as yours would be for me a honour and a real challenge, which is why I am eager to apply for a position.
I am particularly interested in E-marketing and import/export and I would be happy to integrate your company to put my capability of working in team,my enthusiasm, my sense of responsibility and all of my skills and knowledge at your service.
I perfectly know that this opportunity constitutes an advantage for my career, and that will enable me to gain more knowledge in international business practise which I need.
I would appreciate it if you would read my attached CV and grant me an interview when convenient.
I thank you for your consideration and remain at your disposal for any further information. You can contact my business school at : Lien Internet
.
I look forward to hearing from you in the near future.
Yours faithfully
_______________________________________________________________________
NOM Prénom
(signature)
Prenom NOM
adress
Résidence « xxx »
75 000 PARIS
E.mail : xxxxxx@xxxx.fr
Tel : +33 4 ...
Cell. : +33 6 ...
Né le :
Paris (75) France
Single
Driving licence
EDUCATION
2007 – 2008
Second Years at « ecole de commerce » (Paris)
2006 – 2007
Deug Sciences-Economiques (Two years at the faculty of Science-economic of the University of Montpellier 1)
2004 – 2005
Licence 1 – informatics (One year at the Faculty of Sciences of the University of Montpellier 2)
2003 – 2004
BAC-S (equivalent: A-Levels: Maths, Physics, Biology) at Lycée Pompidou secondary school in Castelnau-Le-Lez (France)
WORK EXPERIENCE
2007 (July/August)
Advertising department, hypermarket E.LECLERC St Aunès (34)
Advertising creation.
2003 à 2007
Part-time work at xxx (french temporary work agency) – Lunel (34).
2002 – 2003 (July/August)
Layout of a shop (Do-it-yourself shop). Selling, receipting, consumer adviser.
Company xx and M. xxx. Le xxx (34).
2001 (August)
Waiter. Hotel « Côte d’Azur » Le Lavandou (83).
LANGUAGE SKILLS
French: Mother tongue.
- English: Average level in conversational and business English.
- Spanish: Average level in conversational and business Spanish.
-Chinese: Basic knowledge of Chinese.
COMPUTING SKILLS
Complete mastery of : Word, Excel, PowerPoint, computer network tools and internet.
Operating system : Winows, Linux, Mac.
Software : Image and sound, (Cubase, Soundforge, Photoshop,...) for personal use.
INTEREST
Informatics-multimedia
Guitar, music.
Extreme sports.
Photography.
My friends.
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Modifié par bridg le 25-02-2008 11:32
CV / Divers