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My US cover letter
Message de frank69 posté le 11-11-2010 à 10:25:38 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
je dois faire un stage aux Etats-Unis dans le cadre de mon BTS. Pouvez-vous me dire s'il y a des fautes dans ma lettre de motivation svp s'il vous plaît?.
"Dear Mr X,
I am writing to explore the possibility of participating in a training program in your company. As a French student pursuing a degree in Export Marketing, I am required by my University to complete a practical training in a company abroad. My training must start from Mai 9th 2011 to July 15th 2011 in the field of prospecting for American or French customers.
[Un petit paragraphe qui explique les lois américaines sur les réduction de taxes lorsqu'on embauche un Français]
What could interrest your company is my language travel in New York and Los Angeles during 6 month wich enable me to know the American culture. I am also a contractor, I created a company in July 2010 in the field of digital videos, you can see my website here : xxx
Furthermore I like to be in contact with people of different cultures and I am motivated to be part of your staff and find you new custumers.
I look forward to hearing from you soon and I strongly believe that my motivation, personal skills and studies will allow me to excel in a training position with you.
Sincerely."
Merci pour votre aide.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 11-11-2010 10:36
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Message de frank69 posté le 11-11-2010 à 10:25:38 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
je dois faire un stage aux Etats-Unis dans le cadre de mon BTS. Pouvez-vous me dire s'il y a des fautes dans ma lettre de motivation
"Dear Mr X,
I am writing to explore the possibility of participating in a training program in your company. As a French student pursuing a degree in Export Marketing, I am required by my University to complete a practical training in a company abroad. My training must start from Mai 9th 2011 to July 15th 2011 in the field of prospecting for American or French customers.
[Un petit paragraphe qui explique les lois américaines sur les réduction de taxes lorsqu'on embauche un Français]
What could interrest your company is my language travel in New York and Los Angeles during 6 month wich enable me to know the American culture. I am also a contractor, I created a company in July 2010 in the field of digital videos, you can see my website here : xxx
Furthermore I like to be in contact with people of different cultures and I am motivated to be part of your staff and find you new custumers.
I look forward to hearing from you soon and I strongly believe that my motivation, personal skills and studies will allow me to excel in a training position with you.
Sincerely."
Merci pour votre aide.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 11-11-2010 10:36
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Réponse: My US cover letter de frank69, postée le 11-11-2010 à 10:27:11 (S | E)
Oups, première erreur, wich => which
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