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Message from san99 posted on 09-06-2012 at 20:45:25 (D | E | F)
Hello,
I am trying to write better English and I am now going to post one more paragraph below.
I would appreciate if you edit it or comment on it. If you can highlight my mistakes I will be very happy.
Thank you very much.
It is not easy to choose a wedding gown for your wedding day so the decision has to be taken wisely. Some women would spend several months in just deciding the wedding dress style while others would go for the conventional outfit without going into any deep details. Choosing the conventional wedding gown is, indeed, time saving, because you don't need to go out and surf the market every other day. A wedding dress style considered ideal for the big day is " Retro or Vintage wedding gown." It's more of an unconventional style having some historical worth or background.Certainly, vintage wedding gown will make your beauty more esteemed and adorable, because you will get a chance to live the history again. Someone's else gown might get her started with the lifetime of happiness, and now wearing the same dress you are going to start-over with your journey+ going on the right stride of happiness. Isn't it romantic to wear an old outfit, which is linked-up up with the old days? It's not that you would feel yourself travelling back in the time, but you would feel a sense of uniqueness for sure by wearing a different gown.
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Edited by lucile83 on 09-06-2012 22:34
Message from san99 posted on 09-06-2012 at 20:45:25 (D | E | F)
Hello,
I am trying to write better English and I am now going to post one more paragraph below.
I would appreciate if you edit it or comment on it. If you can highlight my mistakes I will be very happy.
Thank you very much.
It is not easy to choose a wedding gown for your wedding day so the decision has to be taken wisely. Some women would spend several months in just deciding the wedding dress style while others would go for the conventional outfit without going into any deep details. Choosing the conventional wedding gown is, indeed, time saving, because you don't need to go out and surf the market every other day. A wedding dress style considered ideal for the big day is " Retro or Vintage wedding gown." It's more of an unconventional style having some historical worth or background.Certainly, vintage wedding gown will make your beauty more esteemed and adorable, because you will get a chance to live the history again. Someone's else gown might get her started with the lifetime of happiness, and now wearing the same dress you are going to start-over with your journey+ going on the right stride of happiness. Isn't it romantic to wear an old outfit, which is linked-up up with the old days? It's not that you would feel yourself travelling back in the time, but you would feel a sense of uniqueness for sure by wearing a different gown.
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Edited by lucile83 on 09-06-2012 22:34
Re: Correction/text from gerondif, posted on 10-06-2012 at 22:26:10 (D | E)
Hello,
It is not easy to choose a wedding gown for your wedding day, so the decision has to be taken wisely. Some women would spend several months (in) just deciding the wedding dress style while others would go for the conventional outfit without going into any deep details. Choosing the conventional wedding gown is, indeed, time saving, because you don't need to go out and surf the market every other day. A wedding dress style considered ideal for the big day is the " Retro or Vintage wedding gown." It's more of an unconventional style having some historical worth or background.Certainly, a vintage wedding gown will make your beauty more esteemed and adorable, because you will get a chance to live
Re: Correction/text from san99, posted on 10-06-2012 at 22:37:00 (D | E)
I really appreciate your participating on the forum and helping me identify the mistakes. I made a few mistakes in the content, but overall I am happy that my writing is improving. It's all just because forum members are constantly helping me and trying to highlight all mistakes from which I learn to write properly, and it's all pretty smooth.Thanks
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