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Message from dlsur posted on 25-07-2012 at 21:32:09 (D | E | F)
Hello everyone.
Please I need help with a correction about this essay, actually an advantage or disadvantage.
Thanks for your answers.
Advantages and disadvantages of electric cars.
Nowadays , the trend in the cars market is changing , the electric cars are a new option in the market, in contrast with gas cars . One of the most important reason of this change is the petrol cost . There are many reasons for thinking in an electric car , but we can find some problem in accordance with this new technology .
To start with , the main advantage is that an electric car saves money because reduce the consume in fossil fuel and consequently we help the environment , for instance with the green house effect. Secondly this is a new line of work , and that means much investment in new technologies and much work in the factories.
On the other hand , the first disadvantage is that , this kind of cars are expensives , we can find several difference between a gas car and an electric car, obviously this is going to change with the time . Another important disadvantage , for example is the problem in to find in some cities charge points, for this kind of cars.
All thing considered , the electric cars are a good alternative in comparison to gas cars , but we can forget that first we have to invest an important sum in this kind of car.
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Edited by dlsur on 25-07-2012 21:33
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Edited by lucile83 on 25-07-2012 22:42
Message from dlsur posted on 25-07-2012 at 21:32:09 (D | E | F)
Hello everyone.
Please I need help with a correction about this essay, actually an advantage or disadvantage.
Thanks for your answers.
Advantages and disadvantages of electric cars.
Nowadays , the trend in the cars market is changing , the electric cars are a new option in the market, in contrast with gas cars . One of the most important reason of this change is the petrol cost . There are many reasons for thinking in an electric car , but we can find some problem in accordance with this new technology .
To start with , the main advantage is that an electric car saves money because reduce the consume in fossil fuel and consequently we help the environment , for instance with the green house effect. Secondly this is a new line of work , and that means much investment in new technologies and much work in the factories.
On the other hand , the first disadvantage is that , this kind of cars are expensives , we can find several difference between a gas car and an electric car, obviously this is going to change with the time . Another important disadvantage , for example is the problem in to find in some cities charge points, for this kind of cars.
All thing considered , the electric cars are a good alternative in comparison to gas cars , but we can forget that first we have to invest an important sum in this kind of car.
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Edited by dlsur on 25-07-2012 21:33
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Edited by lucile83 on 25-07-2012 22:42
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