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Message de vir posté le 23-02-2014 à 14:23:52 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous,
voici une petite lettre, j'aimerais savoir s'il y a des fautes s'il vous plaît :
Dear host family,
My name is Lea. I have 18 years-old and I study sciences in High school. I love to travel and to discover others ways of living and of thinking. I read a lot and I write sometimes. I like video games too. I see my fathers every days and I know that I can count on them. My brother doesn’t live in our home anymore, but he often comes back. I would like to leave for win in maturity and discover what there is outside of the life I have ever known. I already know it will be a wonderful adventure and that it will change me a lot. I don’t want a year where I am amazed at extraordinary things but where I discover ordinary things. I hope that me too, if you want it, I will bring you, and the high school where I will go, a little of my culture,
Friendly,
Merci pour votre aide !
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Modifié par lucile83 le 23-02-2014 18:27
Message de vir posté le 23-02-2014 à 14:23:52 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous,
voici une petite lettre, j'aimerais savoir s'il y a des fautes s'il vous plaît :
Dear host family,
My name is Lea. I have 18 years-old and I study sciences in High school. I love to travel and to discover others ways of living and of thinking. I read a lot and I write sometimes. I like video games too. I see my fathers every days and I know that I can count on them. My brother doesn’t live in our home anymore, but he often comes back. I would like to leave for win in maturity and discover what there is outside of the life I have ever known. I already know it will be a wonderful adventure and that it will change me a lot. I don’t want a year where I am amazed at extraordinary things but where I discover ordinary things. I hope that me too, if you want it, I will bring you, and the high school where I will go, a little of my culture,
Friendly,
Merci pour votre aide !
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Modifié par lucile83 le 23-02-2014 18:27
Réponse: Correction/host family de bluestar, postée le 23-02-2014 à 17:09:52 (S | E)
Hello..
Dear host family,
My name is Lea. I have 18 years-old and I study sciences in High school. I love to travel and to discover others ways of living and of thinking. I read a lot and I write sometimes. I like video games too. I see my fathers
every days (singulier apres 'every') and I know that I can count on them. My brother doesn’t live in our home anymore, but he often comes back. I would like to leave for win in maturity and discover what there is outside of the life I have Friendly,
'With best wishes', ou 'sincerely' serait mieux
Réponse: Correction/host family de vir, postée le 23-02-2014 à 19:17:07 (S | E)
Merci.
Réponse: Correction/host family de camillelorraine, postée le 23-02-2014 à 19:38:59 (S | E)
Dear host family,
My name is Lea. I have (verbe être) 18 years-old and I study sciences in High school. I love to travel (traveling, pas de to) and discover others ways of living and of thinking
. I read a lot(so much) and I write sometimes (sometimes avant le verbep). I like video games too. I see my fathers every days and I know that I can count on them. My brother doesn’t live in our home, but he often comes back. I would like to leave for win in maturity and discover what there is outside of the life I have ever known. I already know it will be a wonderful adventure and that it will change me a lot. I don’t want a year where I am amazed at extraordinary things but where I discover ordinary things. I hope that me too, if you want it, I will bring you, and the high school where I will go, a little of my culture,Friendly,
Tes phrases sont un peu trop traduites mot à mot, ce n'est pas grave mais ça fait bizarre.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 23-02-2014 21:11
Correction non fiable car vous laissez trop de fautes
Réponse: Correction/host family de here4u, postée le 23-02-2014 à 20:06:13 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
En plus des corrections apportées, je retirerais le tiret de '18 years-old'. Il faut mettre un tiret lorsqu'on fait un adjectif composé : an 18-year-old girl (et comme il fait partie de l'adjectif - invariable en anglais-, 'years' perd son s !) Sinon, on écrit '18 years old' !
De plus, camillelorraine a indiqué la faute de 'I love to travel'; il y a, bien sûr la même pour 'discover'
Bon courage !
here4u
Réponse: Correction/host family de bluestar, postée le 26-02-2014 à 09:35:38 (S | E)
Hello,
'I love to travel' seems ok to me; so does 'I love travelling'. They mean the same thing. I quote from the Oxford Learner's Pocket Grammar: "some verbs can take either a to-infinitive or a gerund with no difference in meaning"..The examples given, as well as love, include begin, bear, hate, intend, like, prefer, propose , start, and six others. On the Internet I find, "Ten Careers for People who Love to Travel".
Réponse: Correction/host family de lemagemasque, postée le 26-02-2014 à 16:21:02 (S | E)
Hello bluestar!
Il y a une petite différence entre les deux ; elle tend cependant à disparaître !
- I love travelling : J'aime voyager en général, ce qui est accentué par le gérondif.
- I love to travel : C'est quelque chose que je n'aime pas faire généralement, sauf en certaines circonstances.
I like watching films but I don't like to go to the pictures alone.
Ca peut être aussi quelque chose de nouveau : I'd love to go to the beachside. I've never been there before.
Ca peut être quelque chose de ponctuel, qui ne se produit pas tout le temps ou rarement : When I am on holiday with a friend, I like to watch grass grow.
Pour savoir quelle forme il faut mettre après certains verbes, demandez-vous si c'est quelque chose de ponctuel/de nouveau ou d'habituel, ça ne marchera pas pour tous les verbes, mais c'est un conseil que je fais :
I prefer to stay at home at weekends but I prefer eating chocolate, it's better.
I don't mind listening to music, I love it!
I'd like to eat chocolate.
I wish to have a dog.
You've deserved to be on the homepage!
I've decided to go to England.
See you!
Réponse: Correction/host family de bluestar, postée le 26-02-2014 à 17:18:28 (S | E)
Thanks Lemagemasque
I'm aware of these arguments, but the distinctions you make have not much legitimacy in normal English discourse as far as the listed verbs are concerned; that is why the Oxford Grammar didn't give them any weight. If I say "I love to travel" and someone else says "Well, I'm not like you, I just love travelling", it is going to be a dialogue of the deaf! I still think the infinitive can convey these nuances as effectively as the gerund.
Réponse: Correction/host family de lemagemasque, postée le 26-02-2014 à 18:34:39 (S | E)
Hello!
I agree with you, a lot of people don't care for those little subtleties. However they still exist.
I won't frown at you anyway if you say "I like to drink beer".
See you!
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