A formal email/help

A formal email/help
Message de isarosa posté le 28-03-2014 à 04:11:19 (S | E | F)
Good evening,

I've just finished a formal email. I would like you to read it and tell me if it is correct.
Thanks for your help.
Hotel xxx
Subject: book a room

Dear Sir
My names is ........I am contacting you to book a double room for the next month. It would be from the 14th to 20st inclusive. I would like to know the price and if pets are allowed.
I have looked at your website, but there is no information about prices and pets.
I would also like some information about accommodation. My husband is diabetic and I need to know if there is any medical centre nearby, in case we need it.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully
.xcxcxc(sign)

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Modifié par lucile83 le 28-03-2014 07:36

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Réponse: A formal email/help de sherry48, postée le 17-04-2014 à 13:38:29 (S | E)
Hello.

Hotel xxx
Subject: book a room

Dear Sir
My names is ........I am contacting you to book a double room for the next month. It would be from the 14th to 20st inclusive. I would like to know the price and if pets are allowed.
I have looked at your website, but there is no information about prices and pets.(There is another conjunction that would be better since this is a negative statement.)
I would also like some information about accommodation. My husband is diabetic and I need to know if there is any medical centre nearby, in case we need it.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully
.xcxcxc(sign)

Sherry

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