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Message de busterfamily posté le 01-05-2014 à 19:15:25 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
je viens d’écrire un texte en anglais, sur une oeuvre caritative, et je ne suis pas sûr de ne pas avoir fait de fautes.
C'est pour ça que je voudrais que quelqu'un m'aide à corriger ses fautes.
Merci à celui qui m'aidera.
Cordialement,
Rêves is a charity , and they mission is to realize the dream of child or adolescent.
The charity was found in 1994 by Christopher Charlet, then has contacted dome Knowledge.
They first realized dream is for a young girl, she wanted to met Patrick Bruel.
Christopher and his team asked to patrick if she could meet hin, he accept that, also, he spent a day with her.
In 2012 they was found, the first national day of the dream, whereas they was accomplites 3158 dreams of young people.
In other words, they was the maker of dream. That's way I heve cose this carity, by the way, if I could, I'd do anything to help the Cristopher's team.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 01-05-2014 21:35
Message de busterfamily posté le 01-05-2014 à 19:15:25 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
je viens d’écrire un texte en anglais, sur une oeuvre caritative, et je ne suis pas sûr de ne pas avoir fait de fautes.
C'est pour ça que je voudrais que quelqu'un m'aide à corriger ses fautes.
Merci à celui qui m'aidera.
Cordialement,
Rêves is a charity , and they mission is to realize the dream of child or adolescent.
The charity was found in 1994 by Christopher Charlet, then has contacted dome Knowledge.
They first realized dream is for a young girl, she wanted to met Patrick Bruel.
Christopher and his team asked to patrick if she could meet hin, he accept that, also, he spent a day with her.
In 2012 they was found, the first national day of the dream, whereas they was accomplites 3158 dreams of young people.
In other words, they was the maker of dream. That's way I heve cose this carity, by the way, if I could, I'd do anything to help the Cristopher's team.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 01-05-2014 21:35
Réponse: Correction/Charity de eg180, postée le 06-05-2014 à 13:58:51 (S | E)
Hello,
Rêves is a charity ,
The charity was found founded in 1994 by Christopher Charlet, then has contacted dome Knowledge. (Pas clair)
They first
Christopher and his team asked
In 2012 they was found, the first national day of the dream, whereas they was accomplites 3158 dreams of young people. (pas clair)
In other words, they
I hope this helps.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 06-05-2014 19:03
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Réponse: Correction/Charity de eg180, postée le 06-05-2014 à 14:00:04 (S | E)
Rêves is a charity ,
I forgot one correction in the opening sentence.
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