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Message de jc17 posté le 06-12-2015 à 18:53:23 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous,
je dois faire un devoir en anglais, et je vais le présenter à l'oral. J'aimerais savoir si grammaticalement ilétait est correct, je ne suis pas une flèche très bon en anglais, merci de votre indulgence et de votre aide.
"If we wrote" to smoke makes red "on the packages of fags, many would stop" "Freeze your red children, we shall find a solution one day."
It is the former names about some groups Facebook that speak red-haired persons, and laugh at them. It makes hundreds of anti-red thousands of gathered people.
If you are not red, that you have never had of red-haired person in your entourage, and that you are (naive), you doubtless think that the redness is not a problem, you are wrong.
The anti red hair does not new groups Facebook even of Web 1.0. Rather of the IVe before JC. And yes it dates and the world does not evolve ..
The red hair have lot of mockery to the school, and it's not always easy for them. Somebody red people live bad. Somebody go even until kill hem.. Then..
We must be proud to be red, to have a blazing hair color.
As most of the minorities, red-haired persons created movements. There are the red-haired persons in the Netherlands
Their rarity makes their value. Only 2 % of people are red all over the world.
The white hair are rare at the red-haired person's and the wrinkles also
A red beard of a few days, it's all the same sexy
Any person having slept with a red guy can confirm. They are a lucky
They are romantic guys. They like when love is passionate.
The red-haired persons have of personalities.
If a person laughs it is certainly by jealousy.
Then be proud of your hair color, and play with that.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 06-12-2015 21:38
Message de jc17 posté le 06-12-2015 à 18:53:23 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous,
je dois faire un devoir en anglais, et je vais le présenter à l'oral. J'aimerais savoir si grammaticalement il
"If we wrote" to smoke makes red "on the packages of fags, many would stop" "Freeze your red children, we shall find a solution one day."
It is the former names about some groups Facebook that speak red-haired persons, and laugh at them. It makes hundreds of anti-red thousands of gathered people.
If you are not red, that you have never had of red-haired person in your entourage, and that you are (naive), you doubtless think that the redness is not a problem, you are wrong.
The anti red hair does not new groups Facebook even of Web 1.0. Rather of the IVe before JC. And yes it dates and the world does not evolve ..
The red hair have lot of mockery to the school, and it's not always easy for them. Somebody red people live bad. Somebody go even until kill hem.. Then..
We must be proud to be red, to have a blazing hair color.
As most of the minorities, red-haired persons created movements. There are the red-haired persons in the Netherlands
Their rarity makes their value. Only 2 % of people are red all over the world.
The white hair are rare at the red-haired person's and the wrinkles also
A red beard of a few days, it's all the same sexy
Any person having slept with a red guy can confirm. They are a lucky
They are romantic guys. They like when love is passionate.
The red-haired persons have of personalities.
If a person laughs it is certainly by jealousy.
Then be proud of your hair color, and play with that.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 06-12-2015 21:38
Réponse: Correction/ les Roux de lemagemasque, postée le 07-12-2015 à 19:30:55 (S | E)
Hello!
Pour varier un peu, on peut aussi utiliser le terme ginger pour désigner les personnes rousses.
Pour l'anecdote, une nouvelle de Sherlock Holmes s'intitule the red-headed league.
Un peu de lecture, très intéressante : Lien internet
Pas le temps de corriger vos fautes mais il y en a (pas trop grosses)...
Bonne journée !
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Modifié par lemagemasque le 07-12-2015 19:36
Juste une question : les guillemets sont pour citer ?
Réponse: Correction/ les Roux de violet91, postée le 08-12-2015 à 01:13:04 (S | E)
Hello lemage ,
'The red-headed league' by ...Conan Doyle you mean .
( your link was interesting to read ) . Cours gratuits > Forum > Forum anglais: Questions sur l'anglais
