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Message de lise74 posté le 07-04-2016 à 19:44:46 (S | E | F)
Hello!
I just had a phone interview and I wanted to send a thank you email to the woman I was speaking to.
Can you please have a look at my message and see if something is wrong?
I am not goodwith at prepositions!
"Hello XX,
Thank you very much for interviewing me today for the Clinical Monitoring Designer position and giving me the opportunity to express my motivation in joining XX again.
If you need to go further with some information feel free to contact me again."
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Modifié par lucile83 le 07-04-2016 23:21
Message de lise74 posté le 07-04-2016 à 19:44:46 (S | E | F)
Hello!
I just had a phone interview and I wanted to send a thank you email to the woman I was speaking to.
Can you please have a look at my message and see if something is wrong?
I am not good
"Hello XX,
Thank you very much for interviewing me today for the Clinical Monitoring Designer position and giving me the opportunity to express my motivation in joining XX again.
If you need to go further with some information feel free to contact me again."
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Modifié par lucile83 le 07-04-2016 23:21
Réponse: Mail/ remerciement de gerondif, postée le 08-04-2016 à 15:04:08 (S | E)
Bonjour,
erreurs en bleu, corrections en vert
"Hello XX,
Thank you very much for interviewing me today for the Clinical Monitoring Designer position and for giving me the opportunity to express my motivation in joining XX again.(ou alors, en très littéraire, thus giving me ...)
If you need to go further with some information feel free to contact me again."
J'aurais dit: if you need any further information, please feel free....
En plus relevé:
Please feel free to contact me again should you need any further information.
Any au sens de " un quelconque renseignement, tout renseignement utile".
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