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Message de mouglee posté le 15-05-2016 à 19:05:12 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
J'ai écrit un texte en anglais et j'aimerais bien bénéficier de quelques conseils en grammaire s'il vous plait. Par exemple, me relever des fautes et m'expliquer en quoi c'est faux.
Merci pour vos réponses.
Enterprises of mechanical design and technical system are at a crossroads of information and negotiation (customers or contractors, suppliers, subcontractor, certifications and safety organization, patent filing, schools, etc.). We will consider that intersection as a place of social practices, where are articulated social relationships, transactions, games and rules. The purpose of this study as a first step is to understand how these social practices combined with the act of design who is an analytical activity. The actors are involved in a project whose goal is defined, but they face et uncertainty throughout its implementation. Secondly, we seek to understand how articulates the rational dimension of this activity with the cognitive aspect own creativity and imagination. To do this qualitative research, a series of interviews will be conducted with professionals who work in design office and companies who buy the machines or technical system.
The design is also a mental process and intangible (1) specific to reflexive forces called in this cognitive activity and (2) the inherent creative dimension that allows companies to remain competitive. Thus both creative aspects in the activity and mobilization will depend on the type of business and its management.
In other areas like the art where creativity is also mobilized other constraints appear according to the times. In the Middle Ages artists “devaient créer à l’intérieur de normes assez strictes, avec une certaine dose d’originalité, mais leurs marges étaient étroites et les sujets très cadrés “(Heinich, 2015). Creativity in industrial design is also to articulate with constraints. We will focus on the place of imagination and creativity in design and how the activity revolves rationality put into perspective in the systematization of the design and organization of work with the imagination and creativity.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 15-05-2016 19:09
Message de mouglee posté le 15-05-2016 à 19:05:12 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
J'ai écrit un texte en anglais et j'aimerais bien bénéficier de quelques conseils en grammaire s'il vous plait. Par exemple, me relever des fautes et m'expliquer en quoi c'est faux.
Merci pour vos réponses.
Enterprises of mechanical design and technical system are at a crossroads of information and negotiation (customers or contractors, suppliers, subcontractor, certifications and safety organization, patent filing, schools, etc.). We will consider that intersection as a place of social practices, where are articulated social relationships, transactions, games and rules. The purpose of this study as a first step is to understand how these social practices combined with the act of design who is an analytical activity. The actors are involved in a project whose goal is defined, but they face et uncertainty throughout its implementation. Secondly, we seek to understand how articulates the rational dimension of this activity with the cognitive aspect own creativity and imagination. To do this qualitative research, a series of interviews will be conducted with professionals who work in design office and companies who buy the machines or technical system.
The design is also a mental process and intangible (1) specific to reflexive forces called in this cognitive activity and (2) the inherent creative dimension that allows companies to remain competitive. Thus both creative aspects in the activity and mobilization will depend on the type of business and its management.
In other areas like the art where creativity is also mobilized other constraints appear according to the times. In the Middle Ages artists “devaient créer à l’intérieur de normes assez strictes, avec une certaine dose d’originalité, mais leurs marges étaient étroites et les sujets très cadrés “(Heinich, 2015). Creativity in industrial design is also to articulate with constraints. We will focus on the place of imagination and creativity in design and how the activity revolves rationality put into perspective in the systematization of the design and organization of work with the imagination and creativity.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 15-05-2016 19:09
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