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Message de tania83 posté le 19-05-2016 à 22:15:43 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir à toutes et tous,
Je recherche l'aide de quelqu'un s'il vous plaît qui pourrait m'aider à corriger les éventuelles fautes du texte que je vais vous transmettre. Il s'agit d'un texte en anglais destiné à ma future activité professionnelle. Je vous remercie vraiment par avance.
Tania.

Hello Everyone,
My name is Tania and I'm an affabling, smiling woman of 36 years old who has many ideas.
This blog,which I'll share with you with pleasure, is the beginning of a wonderful adventure for me. This blog aims to explain you how I'll be able to take care of your pets. I'll take care of them by offering home visits for your pets. Professional petsitter, I have the « Certificat de Capcité des Animaux Domestiques » for the cats. In a close future, I'll have this « Certificat » for the dogs.
For me, each pet is unique and each pet merits all of my attentions.
You have to be away ( holidays, weekend, professional imperative, hospitalisation), I'll offer you home visits in the greatest respect of your private life to take care of your pet in the best conditions.
I'll offer you an invidualized assistance. I'll commit to observing all of your advices and the habits of your pet.
Before everything, offering you the best is to know you.

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Modifié par lucile83 le 19-05-2016 22:20

Réponse: Correction /animal de gerondif, postée le 20-05-2016 à 10:37:48 (S | E)
Bonjour,
erreurs en bleu, corrections en vert
Hello Everyone,
My name is Tania and I'm an outgoing ~~affabling~~, smiling woman aged 36 ~~of 36 years old~~ ~~who has~~ with many original ideas.
This blog, which I'll be happy to share with you ~~with pleasure,~~ is the beginning of a wonderful adventure for me. This blog ~~aims to explain you~~ will tell you how I'll be able to take care of your pets. I'll take care of them by offering home visits for your pets. Professional petsitter, I have the following certification: « Certificat de Capacité des Animaux Domestiques » for ~~the~~ cats. ~~In a close future,~~ I'll shortly have this « Certificat » for ~~the~~ dogs too.
For me, each pet is unique and each pet ~~merits~~ deserves all of my attention.
Whenever you have to be away ( holidays, weekend, professional imperative, hospitalisation), I'll offer you home visits in the greatest respect of your private life to take care of your pets in the best conditions.
I'll offer you an invidualized assistance. It will be my duty to take all your advice into account and to respect the habits of your pets.
~~Before everything,~~ Most of all, offering you the best is to know you.(je ne comprends pas cette phrase: vous offrir le meilleur c'est de vous connaitre ??

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