Dialogue/départ

Dialogue/départ
Message de lili4567 posté le 14-09-2016 à 18:07:56 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
J’ai un dialogue à réaliser en anglais mais je ne suis pas sûr que tout soit juste.
Il faut faire un dialogue imaginaire entre une mère et une fille qui se disent au revoir car la fille part à l’université.
De plus je ne sais pas comment traduire le titre de mon dialogue.

(Le départ au collège)
A mother and her daughter said goodbye.
- So, are you stressed ?
- Yeah.
- Don’t worry, everithing will be ok !
- Yeah but I don’t know if I’m going to achieve the college.
- Don’t tell me this ! I mean, you’re a smooth operater ! You’re going to achieve the college !
- Yeah, you’re right, but I have so many things to do, I mean I have to take away my things, I have to do my homework’ I have to make some friends...
- Yeah, but you’re tidy, you’re hardworking, you’re not fussy, you’re not going to make a fuss, so don’t worry, and even if you’re discreet, I’m sure that you’re going to meet lot of friends.
- Yeah thank mom !
- Oh, and by the way, don’t forgeting to fill up the car and to inflate the tyres.
- OK, mom !
- I’m very happy for you, but now, if you don’t mind, I’ve got much work to do. And you’ve got many hours to run !
- I wanted to thank you for the car, Mom. I wouldn’t make it without Dad’s station wagon. By the way, sorry about my asking , it’s going to sound a bit silly but does the car run right ?
- Perfect. I greased it last week. And its tyres have been inflated...
- Ok then, I must going now. Give a hug, Mom.


Merci d’avance pour vos réponses.

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Modifié par lucile83 le 15-09-2016 00:09

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Réponse : Dialogue/départ de here4u, postée le 15-09-2016 à 01:05:19 (S | E)
Hello !

Pour le titre, ce serait bien d'employer un gérondif qui tiendrait la place du nom "départ" ... Lien internet

(Le départ au collège)
A mother and her daughter said (temps) goodbye.
- So, are you stressed ?
- Yeah.
- Don’t worry, everithing(spelling) will be ok !
- Yeah but I don’t know if I’m going to achieve the college.not sure of what you mean...
- Don’t tell me this ! I mean, you’re a smooth operater ! You’re going to achieve the college !
- Yeah, you’re right, but I have so many things to do, I mean I have to take away my things,(??) I have to do my homework’ I have to make some friends...
- Yeah, but you’re tidy,(?? OK?) you’re hardworking, you’re not fussy, you’re not going to make a fuss, so don’t worry, and even if you’re discreet, I’m sure that you’re going to meet lot of friends.
- Yeah thank mom !
- Oh, and by the way, don’t forgeting to fill up the car and to inflate the tyres.(very clumsy!)
- OK, mom !
- I’m very happy for you, but now, if you don’t mind, I’ve got much work to do. And you’ve got many hours to run !
- I wanted to thank you for the car, Mom. I wouldn’t make it without Dad’s station wagon. By the way, sorry about my asking , it’s going to sound a bit silly but does the car run right ?
- Perfect. I greased it last week. And its tyres have been inflated...
- Ok then, I must going now. Give a hug, Mom.

Est-ce vraiment un départ pour l'Université ? Dialogue fort improbable ... des répétitions et juxtapositions de petites phrases minimales ... A retravailler ...

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